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A Good Day to Fish

a pelican soars over the bay's calm waters -- a good day to fish 3/27/21

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Date: 4/6/2021 7:13:00 PM
A beautiful picture in my mind of a bird gliding over the calm waves as he searches for a fish. God Bless, JB
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, Judy!
Date: 4/3/2021 5:31:00 PM
I have never written a Haiku. That does not however stop me from loving to read them. This poem shall be my teacher for now. I can now visualize this pelican and the cool breezes of the bay..Beautifully descriptive
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 12:55:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely compliment, Michael!
Date: 3/30/2021 2:32:00 PM
Love the image, Kim! :) gw
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 3/30/2021 3:17:00 AM
Ah, so beautiful Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 3/29/2021 5:22:00 PM
this is very charming!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 3/28/2021 7:53:00 PM
Nicely written and very descriptive with just three lines and seventeen syllables.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, Robert!
Date: 3/28/2021 3:40:00 PM
what a wonderful sight! Lovely image!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thank you JCB!
Date: 3/28/2021 12:41:00 PM
Lovely haiku. Pelicans are great fisher birds.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 3/28/2021 11:26:00 AM
- Hope the fish bites ... for a top win :) - Great written, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/28/2021 7:47:00 AM
How many did you catch and what kind? I like to go fishing. Enjoyed reading your work. I was delighted that you dropped by my POTD. Sara
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 10:00:00 AM
Sara, I'm afraid the closest I've come to fishing is writing this poem! Ha! My husband is the fisherman but he's not too lucky. Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 3/28/2021 7:15:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Kim ~
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 3/28/2021 6:23:00 AM
Brought back memories of the seventeen mile drive on California's Pacific Coast, pelicans and seals everywhere. Tom
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! Glad you liked it.
Date: 3/28/2021 3:59:00 AM
It's amazing how shore birds can find fish as they fly over the ocean's surface. Great haiku, Kim! Hope you catch a big one the next time out. Hugs, Carolyn
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Carolyn!