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A Good Bye

Wave Wave away the salt ridden distress Your breath slides down the sinking pit within you A quicksand of hungering wants Fangs bared, coarse tongue whipping out No mothers breast Only your unclaimed breath A veil Mountainous Your lungs, in your chest, near your heat, thump, you feel it A sea of pressure Unrelenting, wave after wave battering this virgin shore White buds wilt Red heart shrivels, a raisin The shrinking shadow Waves © Samir Georges 2008

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Date: 1/1/2010 11:56:00 PM
I just love the feeling this creates. Is it a drowning? That is how it feels to me. Andrea
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