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A Gnawing Urge

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Meet Otis; drug addict and alcoholic. He walks the razor's edge of life daily. A sad sack of a man bedeviled by stubborn demons. Swimming against the tide of recovery; crying out for help. Surviving one day at a time; struggling with addictions threatening to submerge him in a quicksand, wrestling with harrassing voices in his discombobulated head. They keep swirling around him like a noisy, bothersome flies. He's pulled into a rabbit hole of temptation everywhere he goes. His gnawing urge... to drink alcohol growing stronger and stronger at happy hours. His addiction to cocaine and heroin is just as potent. Each day, he tries his best to stay sober, but can't do it alone. Submitted for... Writing Prompts - Fragmented Spaces - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme: sadness in life Dates posted: 07/29/2021

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Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2021 8:04:00 AM

Edward, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my created form look marvelous, well done, yes, so many crying out for help, great image used also ~Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/17/2021 6:22:00 PM

Thank you very much for my placement and the congratulations, Constance:-) Most appreciated.

Bhawana Pant

Date: 8/13/2021 11:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.Lovely..

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/14/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thank you, Bhawana!:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/13/2021 8:57:00 PM

Edward,congratulations on your win in Constance's contest . Hugs Eve

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/14/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eve:-) *Hugs*

Ms Affection

Date: 8/13/2021 2:12:00 PM

WOW! The struggles of Otis. This was great to read

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/14/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thank you so much, MA:-)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/13/2021 11:01:00 AM

Edward, congratulations on your well-deserved win. You deserve it with this great poem. The imagery, metaphors, and exquisite poetic lines were very numerous and attractive—best wishes, dear friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/14/2021 8:48:00 AM

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback and visit, Lasaad:-) Have a blessed day, my friend!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/13/2021 10:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Edward. Addiction has stolen the potential, and lives, of hundreds including Otis. Thank you for articulating the pain of addiction. Blessings. Know that Otis will remain in my prayers.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/14/2021 8:45:00 AM

Thank you very much for your comments and visit, Sam:-) Most obliged.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/13/2021 8:04:00 AM

Otis will be remembered. You have dealt with a very serious problem. Beautiful writing. Congratulations on your win!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/13/2021 9:50:00 AM

Thank you very much, Christuraj:-) God bless.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/29/2021 8:40:00 PM

You have created a marvelous character sketch of Otis. "wrestling with harrassing voices in his discombobulated head."

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/29/2021 8:43:00 PM

Thank you very much, Caren;-)

John Lawless

Date: 7/29/2021 5:40:00 PM

Edward, this poem is a perfect definition of the contest theme....Fragmented Spaces..those hours of torment fighting an unwinable battle and being incapable of surrender. Nicely Done.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/29/2021 5:42:00 PM

Thank you very much, John:-) I'm glad you liked it.