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A Glutton's Plight

My neighbor is a real glutton At a feast, he gobbled much mutton, Besides other meat, Ate piles of sweet! Now his trousers, he can’t button!!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2023 5:32:00 AM

Well, it is a sad plight for your main character in your Limerick. Sometimes a person needs to see a doctor to rule out some serious physical diseases that can cause a person to overeat. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/27/2021 7:39:00 PM

Hello Valsa ... there's a lesson here Valsa, but I bet he just bought bigger trousers - thank you Valsa - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/14/2021 4:44:00 PM

Are you sure that you don't live on my block, Valsa. Sure sounds as if you've described me to a 'T!' Smiles, Gershon

Valsa George
Date: 11/14/2021 8:42:00 PM

From your face, I could guess you are an avid foodie... ! That's why I wrote this and have dedicated this to you ...Lol

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/14/2021 10:45:00 AM

Be careful now you've caught his eye!

Valsa George
Date: 11/14/2021 8:38:00 PM

Yes, yes, I shall be careful.... ! Thanks Rico for your warning !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/14/2021 4:39:00 AM

You do well in many forms Valsa. Fun read.

Valsa George
Date: 11/14/2021 8:37:00 PM

Much grateful Vijay !

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/14/2021 12:43:00 AM

Great limerick Valsa, every now and again we have a collaboration, you'll have to join us.. Tom

Valsa George
Date: 11/14/2021 8:36:00 PM

Definitely.... my pleasure ! Tom, your very face and your profile picture with the monkey on reflect your hilarious disposition

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2021 11:26:00 PM

Great limerick. Loved it.

Valsa George
Date: 11/14/2021 8:33:00 PM

Thank you very much Victor !

Deb M

Date: 11/13/2021 9:42:00 PM

Hi Valsa….what a nice little ditty. Enjoyed! Debx

Valsa George
Date: 11/14/2021 8:32:00 PM

Thank you Deb for visiting my page... ! Glad if you feel so !