Get Your Premium Membership

A Glimpse of Heritage

A GLIMPSE OF HERITAGE To Visit the past, is to understand your future. The storm was moving away, the noise no longer pounding, Sky turned blue from dark, thunder abating, hail disappearing, I took refuge under a bridge during this fierce storm’s ranting, A bright flash, circular light and colorful vortex was beckoning! I walked towards it, it’s pinkish, purplish aura was mesmerizing I stretched out my hand, the vortex continued enticing, seducing Me to go nearer, I did, I was suddenly lifted and started spinning, As if in a tumble dryer, my head rolled, my body shaking, my senses reeling! Finally thrown out onto lush, green grass and blues skies, a sight so endearing, I heard some familiar words, the clothes worn were white, long and flowing, Garlands in the maidens hair, and plaited small olive branches covering The crown of the men, I steadied myself, the whole scene was stunning. Someone spoke to me in Greek, I answered her without thinking, Two more young girls joined us, skipping, dancing, joyous, abounding, Dressed in my shorts and T-shirt, and a sun hat on, they found this amusing, Then men in tunics arrived Zeus and Poseidon, Apollo and Ares, all introducing Each other to me, Dionysus, Hermes, the women with their breath-taking Beauty were, Athena, Pandora, Artemis, Aphrodite and Diane, goddess of hunting I had gone back through a portal of time, and was in ancient Greece, communicating, With the Greek gods and goddesses, I listened in awe to their story telling Myths about stories of mythology and the gods, fables short stories with sobering Morals and legends which could be about any event, true or false, they were speaking In Greek – I could stay here for the rest of my life, I had arrived in the middle of their dining, And so they invited me to stay and eat, but where was I from, what strange visiting Alien was I? The Greek spoken was ancient and mine modern, but we were managing, It was getting late, so Prometheus and his famous story of the gift of fire, began leading Me, to the piece of ground I had fallen on, Eros charmed me as back we were walking, And Hercules winked at me with a handsome grin, that I will forever be carrying, The bright light was awaiting my return, the vortex, spinning, I was still hugging The exotic Aphrodite, when I succumbed to the vortex, and began journeying, Back to my time and era, would anyone remotely believe what I had been seeing, I would never tell anyone how I got there and back, it was my secret, I continued visiting, My Greek Gods and Goddesses with whom I felt a kindred spirit totally my soul enveloping! This was my Greek heritage I had stumbled across, what an adventure, exciting and thrilling!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/1/2020 6:48:00 PM
I think I am envious, what an adventure! Enjoyed this write.
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/4/2020 1:03:00 PM
Hi MLK, I'll take you with me next time! Glad you enjoyed. Blessings my friend. Jennifer.
Date: 2/9/2020 3:05:00 PM
WoW! Jennifer, I don’t know if time travel really exists or not, all I know is I was transported inside your story.I found it to be well written and clever. Excellent job my friend:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/11/2020 11:36:00 AM
Alexis this is a wonderful comment, thank you. Imagine if we could time travel, but I think in years to come it will become possible. Hope you are well my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/8/2020 9:38:00 PM
Some believe that time travel is possible. Your story was so interesting and brilliantly written Jennifer. I really enjoyed it. xxoo
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/11/2020 11:32:00 AM
Thank-you Connie, a blast from the past - Greek mythology is so rich in History and so very beautiful to read about it. Your comment is lovely, thank you my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/8/2020 12:03:00 PM
A knock out story in verse about your heritage. Well done, Jenn! Creativity runs in your blood. Panagiota Romios xx
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/11/2020 11:29:00 AM
And what about your creativity when you write, very cool! Thanks for a great comment Panagiota, hope you are well! Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/8/2020 8:21:00 AM
You had me from start to finish. What vivid story telling. Thanks for taking me on your journey. Hugs Rick.
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/11/2020 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Rick, Greece is famous for its History and when people go on holiday to Greece, it is impossible to see everything, even if you stayed for 3 months, in fact even in a year! Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 2/6/2020 2:09:00 PM
Such a great adventure Jennifer penned so excellently full of life and amazing imagery. Blessings and hugs,Gordon
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/11/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thank-you Gordon, It is said that some ancient building was actually moved to Scotland, cant recall the story right now but if you google it I'm sure you will find the information. The Greek tradition is that ancient guards wore skirts, and on Greek holidays they dress in them and the Scots have kilts, another thing in common we have! Hope you are keeping well, blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/5/2020 2:02:00 PM
wow, what an adventure that would be! Love this imaginative write
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/11/2020 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Jack - happy you enjoyed, had fun writing it only I couldn't add more gods and goddesses otherwise the poem would never end! Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
Date: 2/5/2020 12:13:00 PM
The ripe fruit of your imagination has given full-bodied texture to this beautiful narrative, Jenny. Greek mythology is so rich! Even our Maltese islands are connected to ancient Greeks...thanks to Homer and the Odyssey. Also the ancient Greeks settled on Malta around 700 BC ~ Warm regards & Hugs, my friend. // paul
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/11/2020 11:12:00 AM
So is Greek spoken in Malta? Kerkyra is the nearest island to Italy (Corfu) and has an enormous amount of Italian influence, absolutely beautiful to visit. Italians and Greeks have a great deal in common, especially their cooking. Thanks for an awesome comment. Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/4/2020 6:27:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … you certainly took me on your journey here, and it was great. You really are a storyteller sharing very interesting tales Jennifer - thank you - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/11/2020 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay I might be a story teller, but so are you and you stories are amazing. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/4/2020 2:23:00 AM
You are a great storyteller... We are all bonded to our past with genetic glue that cannot be broken...
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/11/2020 11:02:00 AM
Thank-you Pashang, never a truer word spoken! Blessings Jennifer.
Date: 2/1/2020 1:39:00 PM
Wow, what a story told in verse. Interesting that you entered a time tunnel to meet your ancestors and the Greek Gods. Really fascinating, Jennifer! Hugs, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/2/2020 12:09:00 PM
I wondered how i could meet them, in a dream perhaps, but a portal sounded like more fun. Thank-you Carolyn, a wonderful comment as always. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/30/2020 10:53:00 PM
'What an adventure, exciting and thrilling' yes your final words on this wonderful gem, and the reading of this poem, is exactly that.
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/31/2020 12:07:00 AM
Thank-you Harry, a wonderful comment, and we have something in common, is your Heritage not from Yorkshire, my father was from Leeds. I posted a poem last year called dual heritage. Thank-you again for an awesome comment. Poetic hugs and blessing, Jennifer.
Date: 1/30/2020 11:41:00 AM
- A wonderful adventure ... sometime in the future you can come back ... and stay there for the rest of "eternity", dear friend Jenny - Enjoy it one more time - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/31/2020 12:04:00 AM
It is enticing, maybe we could both go with our entire families, that would be awesome! Thank-you soul sister for being who you are, just a perfect friend. Hugs and love, Jenny.
Date: 1/29/2020 3:45:00 PM
more sweet storytelling. very fantastical, jennifer! that is wonderful that you come from Greek stock!
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/30/2020 11:59:00 PM
Andrea, I'm so glad we have picked up where we left off, you are one of my first ever wonderful friends I made on soup,. Love and hugs, Jennifer. I do have another poem I posted last year called dual heritage.
Date: 1/29/2020 12:33:00 PM
Nice piece penned so well Jenny, you tell this tale extremely well. Hope still enjoying summer, here it's very wet and cold. Blessings,Gordon
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/30/2020 11:56:00 PM
Hi Gordon, Lovely to have you visit, and I really enjoy your comments. Summer is extremely hot but looking forward to cooler days. Take care, blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/29/2020 11:18:00 AM
what a wonderful and magical disovery Jenny...i know that my grandparents came from italy...(my moms) my fathers i think german and dutch...but i would love to know more about it... make discoveries like this... enjoyed this well crafted poetic story... hugs and blessings :)
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/30/2020 2:00:00 AM
Thank-you Sandy, I love communicating with you, I feel you have been a close friend for years and yet we have recently met on soup. Be blessed my friend. hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/29/2020 9:25:00 AM
Your rich heritage is a solid foundation from which to build --- your generation, your children's, and your children's children's (heritages). When we're younger, we may not realize how much our lives our driven by those who have paved the way for us. Great write, Jennifer! Thanks! Warm wishes, Gershon
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/30/2020 1:58:00 AM
Yes absolutely Gershon, bravo for a terrific comment, we are what we inherit. Blessings and poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/29/2020 7:52:00 AM
So rich is your heritage, Jennifer! The more I see and learn from the ancient time, I am impressed how learned were the Greek people. Your poem is a tribute to them.
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/29/2020 9:23:00 AM
Vijay, what a wonderful comment, thank-you, the Greek philosophers like Plato and Socrates have made their mark in History. Blessings my dear friend, Jennifer.
Date: 1/29/2020 6:29:00 AM
This poem should be reached out to many and the fragrances of cultural heritage needs to be gifted to generations that come by. Great Jennifer great!!
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/29/2020 9:20:00 AM
Hi Swetha, How lovely to have you visit, I missed you, thank you for an awesome comment, yes we must always remember our roots, and where we come from. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/28/2020 2:56:00 PM
What a grand journey my mind has been on while reading your wonderful poem my friend. This was amazing.
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/29/2020 9:11:00 AM
Thank-you Chris - so happy you enjoyed your journey back to my heritage, I felt like a trip to the past, glad i made the journey. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/28/2020 1:40:00 PM
Ooh you are a Greek Goddess? I did not know you had a Greek heritage... Loved this poem... We should never forget where our roots come from..
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/29/2020 9:06:00 AM
Who would we be if it wasn't for our past, our ethos, our norms, our traditions, our entire culture - I am half/half - mother was Greek so speak fluent Greek and Father from Yorkshire in England, he was however an intense Grecophile and also learnt to speak Greek fluently. He was a Greek Englishman! Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/28/2020 12:01:00 PM
I enjoyed your story Jennifer, you have a great imagination for story telling. Well written. Tom
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/29/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thank-you Tom, we both seem to enjoy story telling - its in our genes I would guess. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/28/2020 11:53:00 AM
- Thanks for a wonderful journey with you and your lively imagination ... I enjoy the exciting stay as much as you, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Proxenos Avatar
Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/29/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thank-you my dear friend, I loved your poem about the dusty suitcase, so original and creative. Glad you enjoyed the journey with me. Hugs and love Anne-Lise, Jenny.

Book: Shattered Sighs