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Date written: 12/16/2018

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A Glimpse of a Promising Day

 
                           so, I rose...

                    early morn' today
    and drew open the bedroom curtain
 how glorious, the little bit I saw of dawn!
how wondrous to see the face of the sun....

                             smiling!

       In a split-second, my joyous spirit 
       pirouetted and flung up to heaven
                just a tease...a glimpse 
                    of a promising day.
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Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 10:20 AM
I love short uplifting poems like this. Congrats, Edward. I see below I had even faced it earlier!
Ibeh Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Thank you very much for the revisit, Andrea:-)
George Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 12:00 AM
A lovely little gem.... ! With every new day let your spirit rise high to the Heavens and see fresh promises !
Ibeh Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa;-)
Seeker Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 8:55 PM
Beautiful! Congrats on publishing your book, Edward!
Ibeh Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 10:01 PM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-)
Hankins Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 2:42 PM
So nice, Edward. And another congratulations on your new poetry book!
Ibeh Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 4:52 PM
Thank you very much, Milt:-)
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 1:34 PM
oh wow, I see that I had actually given this a FAVE in the past. GREAT reading voice, Edward!!
Ibeh Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
Pandit Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Simply wonderful--both the poem and the audio.
Ibeh Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 4:00 AM
I like the idea of hope and beauty that you saw in that fleeting moment. I enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 5:22 AM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Merryman Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 6:50 AM
Beautiful way to start the day, Edward! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thank you so much, Kim:-)
Alex Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 7:10 AM
Great picture. Beautiful work. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 9:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Staton Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 12:35 PM
The dawning of a new day. What a blessing! A lovely read!
Ibeh Avatar
June 30, 2020 at 1:03 PM
Thank you so much for visiting one of my favorite poems I've ever written, Valerie:-) Blessings, my friend!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Hello Edward Iben, I have never seen the coming of the dawn. I have seen sunsets. Yet from your poem i do see the early dawn in your poetry. Well done my friend.Have a nice evening my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 10:56 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene!:-)
Barden Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Oh, indeed! Those "little" moments that truly are the fuel that moves us on ... tiny blessings that create the thread of life, woven like strands of light for us to grasp and guide us, (a divine intent behind it, I think) ... excellent write, my friend, and it's going into my favs treasure chest! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours, My Poet Brother! :-)
Ibeh Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Thank you so much, Gregory!:-) I appreciate the wonderful comments
Wolf Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:46 AM
So encouraging! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Gershon
Ibeh Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon:-) I appreciate it
Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 5:30 PM
this is absolutely gorgeous. An instant fave!~
Ibeh Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea!;-)
La France Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Edward, beautiful !!!
Ibeh Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Thank you so much, Constance!:-)!
Gauthier Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Awesome poem, Edward. A beauty.
Ibeh Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Thank you very much, Line!:-) Most appreciated
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:12 PM
It takes a heart of gold to see! Lovely!
Ibeh Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and visit, Kim!:-)
Wanter Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 10:47 AM
So optimistic and uplifting!
Ibeh Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Thank you so very much, Sunlite!:-)
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