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A Gift To Give

A Gift to Give

forgiveness divine
God’s great gift of grace that’s mine
from now for all time

apologies due
address errors past from you
I accept as true

God’s love lives in all
And when mercy does befall
sins are not recalled

8/17/16

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Kamal Al-Adil Date: 4/17/2023 2:59:00 PM Greatly Worded and Definitely gonna take heed Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/8/2020 12:38:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Janis, with great imagery, rhyme and content in this beautiful Senryu. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Sara Chansarkar Date: 8/23/2016 12:43:00 PM Beautiful message Janis.congratulations! Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/23/2016 5:52:00 PM Thanks, Sara

Anisha Dutta Date: 8/22/2016 8:15:00 AM Congrats Janis to win top place. Best Wishes Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/22/2016 9:37:00 AM Thanks for your congrats, Anisha.

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 8/22/2016 2:09:00 AM Congratulations. This is beautiful. Kai Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/22/2016 9:38:00 AM Thanks, Kai. I appreciate your comment. Thanks also for stopping by.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/22/2016 2:06:00 AM Congratulations on your first place win Janis! 7 ; ) Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/22/2016 9:40:00 AM Thanks, Connie.

Sandra Haight Date: 8/21/2016 4:50:00 PM Janis, this is a very inspiring 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/21/2016 11:04:00 PM Thanks, Sandra.

Eve Roper Date: 8/21/2016 1:59:00 PM Janis , congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/21/2016 11:06:00 PM Thanks, Eve.

Charlie Smith Date: 8/21/2016 1:45:00 PM Well written Janis, congratulations... Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/21/2016 11:06:00 PM Thanks, Charlie.

James Inman Date: 8/21/2016 12:03:00 PM Janis, a wonderful sentiment and nice rhyme. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/21/2016 1:41:00 PM Thanks, James

John Hamilton Date: 8/21/2016 11:48:00 AM Nice rhyming senryu, very hard to do, congrats on a worthy win! Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/21/2016 1:42:00 PM I appreciate it. Thanks.

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/21/2016 10:31:00 AM Janis, Love this! You may not have known but I love rhyme sometimes within senryu! I know it doesn't have to rhyme, but I like it..beautiful lady...God lives in us all! congrats on your top win and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/21/2016 1:44:00 PM It was a beautiful thought for a contest. I jumped on it immediately because it was so inviting. Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2016 9:53:00 PM very well done for rhyming senryu, Janis! It seems poets are doing sets of three. I guess I should try for that too! Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 8/17/2016 11:31:00 PM the contest sponsor requested three, like her model. Thanks for the uplifting comments.