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A Gift Horse

In the Australian vernacular he was a ‘flea-bitten’ grey. Not dappled like a dream horse but speckled like a rock and not a fine large horse like Tom Cable’s roman-nosed, Major. Dad had traded for him- with Tom - two rolls of barbed wire and a fence strainer. He came with a used saddle and bridle and the high spirits of the seldom ridden. Dad knew, that before he would let me mount him, he had to take the 'curry' out of him - rode him hard through a ploughed paddock. Rode him until he stood in a foaming sweat ears sideways, subdued. I can’t forget being led, those first few rides “Don’t let go of his head, Dad” I’m not ready yet,” Dad and I knew the horse sensed the trembling in my being, until one day, his bone- jarring trot, became a solved puzzle. I felt a gathering- a sense of balance between the pony’s mouth, the stirrups and the reins and suddenly from a secret fulcrum I was posting, “Let him go now, Dad,” I shouted, A sweet transition to some rhythmic, magic floating Around the homestead once and back I was cantering. I pulled the reins, “Whoa boy!” That first halt obeyed filled my head for days and days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/14/2013 11:51:00 PM
There are - I imagine - many insightful inroads into a well-constructed poem; not least, through the correlatives the poet intentionally provides. In yours, a sincere un-trammeled voice emerges which makes the event of growing-up under the protective eyes of the parent the quintessential experience, so that neither the horse nor even the persona is vital to the poem - symbolically. That's why tropes nor schemes remain essential props here. Well done, Lady. Will read on. Cheers! EGW. Wignesan
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/15/2013 12:53:00 AM
Thankyou for your wonderful comment. It seems that when a dream is fulfilled it takes on wings of its own and sharing is the most natural outlet it can find. SuZ
Date: 5/3/2013 12:01:00 AM
I know zilch about horses, but you really knew how to put me in your shoes. I could feel that pride you had of mastering your commands with the horse, and how the bond quickly began to form. A very well told story!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/3/2013 10:46:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed it Timothy. There is a long narrative further down my page, titled." Memoirs of Mathilde Morgansen," about a girl's adventures With her pony
Date: 5/2/2013 8:57:00 PM
Dear Xegrakio POETESS, S - N, S u Z, YOUR Dad was quite the Barterer. Do YOU have a Picture of " Tony " above YOUR Hearth? Superb Sequel. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR S-P, Poet, Friend, and Loyal Liege...Harry
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/3/2013 10:48:00 AM
I only have an old brownie picture of him with Dad on him after he rode the curry out of him. I will search for it and let you know when I find it. SuZ
Date: 5/2/2013 5:55:00 PM
you made me feel like I was there with you. This is no small thing, you have good communication skills and have imparted the emotions and atmosphere of the day.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/3/2013 10:50:00 AM
Thanks Richard Your comment means a lot. SuZ
Date: 5/2/2013 4:19:00 PM
Fantastic imagery and lines in your poem. You captured the event all so well. So many great lines in your poem I have read it a number of times. You capture the sense of adventure, excitement and achievement effortlessly and with flair. Well done.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/3/2013 10:51:00 AM
Thank you for reading. It means a great deal to me. SuZ
Date: 5/2/2013 12:49:00 PM
This is just a wonderful story. I love horses. It was a pleasure to read, Suzanne...
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/2/2013 1:28:00 PM
Thanks Caleb: Horses are wonderful in all ways. have a great day and thanks for visiting.

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