A Ghost Story

Sue and I had lost contact when we left school and the Dominican Convent,
Met up ten years later, admitted both of us foolish, each nodded consent,
Had coffee, agreed to meet often, lived in Cape Town, merely a suburb apart,
Both so involved with our families, loved our homes, the Cape so stylish and smart.

She invited me to her home for a braai with her family this coming Sunday,
The door was open, I went in, is that you Jenn, I’ve got to look good today,
Mother-in-law coming, do come up, but what took you so long coming upstairs,
I met an old man, we chatted a while, what a sweetie, said his name was Zairs
 
Who, she asked me in disbelief, Zairs, impossible, loved to play musical chairs, 
He told me, is it your dad, Sue,you look alike, spoke of you and how he cares,
But you’ve gone pale as if you’ve seen a ghost, why are you so terribly upset,
Jenn, dad died years ago, seems he got lost, confused, but glad you two met.

Contest entry:One in Five 2 Poetry Contest
A Ghost story
Sponsor: Joseph May
Dated; 26th July 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Nicole Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:05 PM
A story about two friends meeting, suddenly turns into a spiritual occurrence. I was smiling while reading, and then my mouth dropped. You certainly know how to grab the attention on your readers, Jennifer. Congratulations on your win. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
Watt Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 9:33 PM
This is much less creepy than most ghost stories. A nice chat with a sweet man, that's more my speed. Hope you are on the mend and your wrist is getting stronger every day. Love your story telling poetry such as this, and I have been enjoying reading your Tea Break poems. God bless you, sister.
Kiser Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 10:44 AM
A very good short story, ghost stories never cease to entertain. Nicely crafted.
Horsman Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 8:13 PM
The power of friendship, My tack on this story Jennifer. Yes Love it.
Horsman Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 8:14 PM
Oh i see a winner, congrats. Harry
Kalita Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on the win. Truly, you are an incredible story teller, given any canvas you can paint with any colour. Splendid share.... Silpika
Dutta Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 10:57 PM
I believe your story. It happens I have so personal experience but I have heard from many reliable persons. I have not met any deceased person but my soul interacted with my Late Father. Blessings .
Mcintosh Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 6:26 AM
Wow. I'm no good at ghost stories. You did well. Hope you win. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Canerdy Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:36 AM
A moving tale, creatively told. CONGRATS, Jennifer. Janice
Salehi Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 5:49 PM
my dear Jennifer...A little too much to drink?? ... I see ghosts every night around 10 pm when I'm inebriated ... Haha
Poet Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 9:09 AM
Jennifer, I'm back to congratulate you on your well-deserved win. Your imaginative and well-crafted poem is very lovely and full of metaphorical thoughts. Blessings dear friend.
Tor Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 9:03 AM
Wonderful tale Jennifer. Really enjoyed and loved the ending. Blessings your way. Have a great week...
Peck Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 7:59 AM
A beautiful poem, Jennifer. I believe in ghosts. So lovely that the ghost of your friend's dad still comes around to check on her and her friends~"so glad you two met" ~ love it.
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 10:40 PM
What a sudden twist to the story of a casual meeting of two friends in one home..... ! Never expected this... sudden turn of events. I can imagine the pale face of your friend Sue. This shock at the end adds to the beauty of the poem. Great story, Jen!
Gentile Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 5:02 AM
Jennifer, I loved your ghost story! It's totally believable and maybe even a little enviable! Great story telling. happy Sunday xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 4:48 PM
wow, that was a GREAT ghost story, Jennifer. Loved it. Congrats for your win. I fave you back for THIS gem.
May Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 3:09 AM
Very scary meeting a ghost, Congrats on your win Jennifer
Walimbe Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 7:34 AM
Ha! Amazingly written Jennifer! Always in for a ghost story! Have a great day!:)
Proxenos Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 3:53 AM
Thanks Bill, always happy when you enjoy a poem of mine and your wishes for the contest I so appreciate - be well my friend, my wrist almost back to normal. Hugs and blessings Jennifer,
Baker Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Bravo, Jennifer. Loved the ghost poem for this contest. Very entertaining and well rhymed to boot. Thanks for sharing my dear friend and good luck in the contest. Smiles ~ Blessings ~ Bill
Proxenos Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 4:18 AM
Sorry BILL, I ANSWED YOUR COMMENT WITH A COMMENT. HUGS, JENN
Pandit Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 1:38 PM
You are a great story teller, Jennifer. Intriguing write.
Bayles Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Well done, Jennifer, a nice ghost story contained in lines of a poem.
Proxenos Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 10:48 PM
Thanks Mike have a good day, hugs, blessings, JENNIFER
Edmonds  Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 12:49 AM
I believe in ghost stories such as this, I’ve had a few ghostly experiences too. Enjoyed the read… Belle
Buhagiar Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 12:47 AM
I love ghost stories, so long I'm not around to meet one. Best for a win.
Poet Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 6:43 PM
These kinds of tales are all too prevalent, and just hearing them gives you the chills. I'm really hoping Jennifer that you're making progress in her recuperation.
Wolf Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 6:34 PM
I guess this makes you a 'ghost-writer,' Jennifer!
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