A Gentle Touch of Autumn

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The autumn comes, an open book
To satisfy our hungry eyes
But, sometimes things can't just be read
Not like a book upon a shelf
We can't just look, …..they must be felt
With every strain of western wind, 
With every leaf, each brittle vein
Each blade of grass, each drop of rain

Was there ever such a day like this
That stretched beneath the peaceful dust
Of scented hay, while shimmering haze
Goes on and on in overlays
Of misty blue, until it ties
The distant hill to distant sky?


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9/19/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/14/2016 2:55:00 PM
Pristine poetry, I can feel your joy, and that's impressive.
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Date: 10/1/2016 1:47:00 PM
stunning imagery Carrie ty for your visit to my page hope you will try my contest hugs
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Date: 9/20/2016 10:02:00 AM
Beautiful sweet Carrie...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/20/2016 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful! I especially loved the last phrase. Congratulations, Carrie. Agnes
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Date: 9/20/2016 7:19:00 AM
A superb title with some spectacular verses.Really like Connie I also felt I was there.
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Date: 9/19/2016 10:11:00 PM
This is gorgeous Carrie. I felt as if I were there! : ) 7
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Date: 9/19/2016 8:51:00 PM
Simply put, just beautiful poetry, Mrs Carrie. Especially the entire last stanza. It left me feeling lighter:)
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