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A Gentle Soul

Like an archer who bends his bow and holds an arrow with a steady hand his target his only sight already visualising the slain doe in his hands Before she falls she already sees the archers arrow leaving its bow, a split second both pair of eyes make contact Both open, one pair to see no more. The hunter now the hunted See’s into the recess of her soul in the deep pool of her eyes Her head turned towards her fawn She stood her ground the target she had to be The fawn now bucked and leapt into the forest A doe to be a mother to fawns Her sacrifice a befitting one Her soul released carried on a gentle breeze towards the golden sun. 24.1.2021

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Date: 1/28/2021 1:56:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes, Carol. Very well done. Congratulations on your win!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/28/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Sam....much appreciated.
Date: 1/27/2021 6:37:00 PM
So well expressed, Carol. Your final line in particular resonates - the nurturing female soul set free. Best wishes, Brian
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/27/2021 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Brian...yes indeed it does and is :)
Date: 1/27/2021 3:32:00 PM
i found myself returning to this one again and again, and it would've placed higher but for a couple of minor grammatical/punctuation issues..a soulful piece that just allows the moment to unfold on the page..congrats on your win in my contest!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/27/2021 6:28:00 PM
Thanks Charlotte...point noted...much appreciated :))

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