A Gentle Soul

Like an archer who bends his bow 
and holds an arrow with a steady hand 
his target his only sight 
already visualising the slain doe in his hands
Before she falls she already sees the archers
arrow leaving its bow, 
a split second both pair of eyes make contact
Both open, one pair to see no more.

The hunter now the hunted
See’s into the recess of her soul 
in the deep pool of her eyes
Her head turned towards her fawn
She stood her ground the target she had to be
The fawn now bucked and leapt into the forest
A doe to be a mother to fawns 
Her sacrifice a befitting one 
Her soul released carried on a gentle 
breeze towards the golden sun.

24.1.2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/28/2021 1:56:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes, Carol. Very well done. Congratulations on your win!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/28/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thanks Sam....much appreciated.
Date: 1/27/2021 6:37:00 PM
So well expressed, Carol. Your final line in particular resonates - the nurturing female soul set free. Best wishes, Brian
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/27/2021 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Brian...yes indeed it does and is :)
Date: 1/27/2021 3:32:00 PM
i found myself returning to this one again and again, and it would've placed higher but for a couple of minor grammatical/punctuation issues..a soulful piece that just allows the moment to unfold on the page..congrats on your win in my contest!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/27/2021 6:28:00 PM
Thanks Charlotte...point noted...much appreciated :))
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