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A Gentle Breeze

A gentle breeze came blowing by To brush her face and sing the sky A misty blush of twilight rose In melody of sweet repose from "Oliver, a Boy" Submitted to "Rithimus Divisa 9 Poetry Contest" Submitted on "October 8, 2020"

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Gary Radice

Date: 10/12/2020 1:24:00 PM

Hi Brian! I've just revisited the epic poem from which this stanza was taken from. What I like particularly is how thematically different the two pieces of work are. The cruelty and class system from "Oliver, a boy" is a lifetime away from the picture you paint here. Congratulations. Cheers - Gary

John Hamilton

Date: 10/12/2020 12:42:00 PM

Congrats Bryan on a win in Greg's contest, that's quite an accomplishment! This is a special write, off to read the original!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2020 10:55:00 AM

so pretty , Bryan. BIG congrats for your win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/12/2020 10:30:00 AM

What a beautiful and tender romantic picture is seen in your "misty blush" and "twilight rose" Bryan. This flows as easily as your "gentle breeze." I can feel the breeze through your words. Congratulations on your win.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/12/2020 9:08:00 AM

The airy sway of your lush imagery is wonderful, Bryan. Congratulations for your excellent win with this beautifully breezy piece.. ~Susan

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/12/2020 4:29:00 AM

Extraordinary beauty of simplicity here, Bryan ... many people don't realize what a delicate ART that is - loved it - congratulations, and thanks for taking the time to enter my Rithimus Divisa 9 contest. Blessings! :o)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/8/2020 5:45:00 PM

Beautifully delivered, and much enjoyed by me. thank you

Bryan Norton
Date: 10/8/2020 5:59:00 PM

Thank you, Pixie Dust.