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A Geiser

A geiser of emotions
gush of sensations
cyclone of turmoil
at the mere thought of you

Whip lashed back in times
of innocence and passion
when life was bountiful
and time seemed... infinite



AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on July 2, 2018 for contest MID SUMMER STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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Sandra Haight Date: 7/5/2018 8:26:00 PM Lovely poem, Line. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/5/2018 9:22:00 PM Thank you, Sandra. Most appreciated.

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 7/5/2018 6:24:00 PM Forgive me for not giving you my Congrats on your wonderful "A Geiser" win. I enjoyed reading this and will enjoy reading your other writings. Again, Congrats, well deserved. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/5/2018 7:48:00 PM Thank you, Sandra, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Gary Smith Date: 7/5/2018 2:45:00 AM Excellent poem Line, much enjoyed :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/5/2018 5:47:00 AM Thank you, Gary, for your lovely visit and comment.

Susan Gentry Date: 7/4/2018 11:28:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this short but sweet memory of what we thought was falling in love. Well done! Login to Reply

L. J. Carber Date: 7/4/2018 12:36:00 PM Congrats Line--that 2nd stanza nails the essence of youth-- and boy, do I ******* miss it! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/4/2018 3:38:00 PM LOL replaced by a dose wisdom, L.J.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/2/2018 3:11:00 PM Memories sometimes are so good, and delightful. This is why I stay in touch with friends I have had for fifty years. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/2/2018 3:13:00 PM You'll never regret that, Caren. Thanks for your lovely visit.

Tom Cunningham Date: 7/2/2018 9:55:00 AM Oh how we wish those days would last forever, but beautiful memories remain. Good luck. Tom Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 7/2/2018 10:58:00 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.