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A Geiser

A geiser of emotions gush of sensations cyclone of turmoil at the mere thought of you Whip lashed back in times of innocence and passion when life was bountiful and time seemed... infinite AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on July 2, 2018 for contest MID SUMMER STANDARD sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 7/5/2018 8:26:00 PM
Lovely poem, Line. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:22:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/5/2018 6:24:00 PM
Forgive me for not giving you my Congrats on your wonderful "A Geiser" win. I enjoyed reading this and will enjoy reading your other writings. Again, Congrats, well deserved.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/5/2018 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/5/2018 2:45:00 AM
Excellent poem Line, much enjoyed :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/5/2018 5:47:00 AM
Thank you, Gary, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 7/4/2018 11:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this short but sweet memory of what we thought was falling in love. Well done!
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Date: 7/4/2018 12:36:00 PM
Congrats Line--that 2nd stanza nails the essence of youth-- and boy, do I ******* miss it!
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Date: 7/4/2018 3:38:00 PM
LOL replaced by a dose wisdom, L.J.
Date: 7/2/2018 3:11:00 PM
Memories sometimes are so good, and delightful. This is why I stay in touch with friends I have had for fifty years.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/2/2018 3:13:00 PM
You'll never regret that, Caren. Thanks for your lovely visit.
Date: 7/2/2018 9:55:00 AM
Oh how we wish those days would last forever, but beautiful memories remain. Good luck. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/2/2018 10:58:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.

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