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The gardener's hand was feeble, the poet's hand was staid Yesterday's dreams were buried with seeds, last year were laid Yet flowers grew in rainstorms though coupled with the weeds Butterflies came to visit The gardener's heart was eased A smallish yellow butterfly on heal of monarch great Across the wild garden flew and not a moment late For though her wings were little, and she was very small Somehow, she found momentum to fly up the garden wall The gardener watched in wonder in the scene that she was gifted Each nuance of this garden free Her poet's heart uplifted The springtime long now ended and summers turned to fall The gold was tinged with silver and a fairy came to call

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Date: 3/12/2022 8:24:00 AM
Indeed, such a lucid, perfectly rhyming lines with great imagery and poesy.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 3/15/2022 3:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Christuraj, I appreciate your visit and I'm uplifted by your kind comment :) I hope you are having a beautiful and blessed day, thank you for stopping by :) ~BJ
Date: 3/10/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... very delightful and indeed delighting from the start till the end; likewise exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Date: 3/15/2022 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Beatta, I love to hear from you, I feel so blessed by your visit and comment to me <3 God bless you as well my sweet friend, I hope you're having a beautiful joy filled day <3 ~BJ
Date: 2/26/2022 5:39:00 PM
Hi BJ: What a delightful poem. It captured me right down to the sweet closing line.I have a small fairy garden that chose to be… with daffodils that return every spring and the magic that occurs there with birds calling and returning seeds that sprout ….you would understand…..Best, SuZ
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Date: 2/28/2022 5:02:00 PM
It's truly a beautiful gift when the garden re-emerges, such a joy! I am again looking forward to Spring, and maybe this year I can plant, but if not, I wonder if my flowers will be back more wild than ever? I love the visits from the birds, the butterflies and even dragonflies. Thank you for your visit, and sharing your fairy garden with me, what a special and sweet gift we share in these flower gardens <3 I hope you're having a beautiful day, anticipating spring! <3 ~BJ
Date: 12/27/2021 1:41:00 AM
Love this wild garden with flowering plants, weeds and butterflies."The springtime long now ended and summer's turned to fall The gold was tinged with silver and a fairy came to call..." In these four lines you have encapsulated the whole year beginning with spring and ending in winter. Beautiful....!
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 2/28/2022 4:55:00 PM
I am so sorry that I somehow missed this sweet comment from you Valsa! Your encouraging words fill me with joy and truly made me smile <3 I hope that you are having a beautiful day filled with many blessings. <3 ~BJ
Date: 11/16/2021 3:41:00 PM
You write amazing poetry. So inspirational but also using wonderful imagery! Thanks for the train contest. I had no clue what to do and then I was inspired to write from personal experience!
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Date: 11/17/2021 10:25:00 PM
I am so blessed that you entered your wonderful poem in my contest, it was so very personal, and so nostalgic. It is amazing how you crafted so much of your heart, your story into it. I love it so much, I want to get back and read it again. You did an awesome job!
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Date: 11/17/2021 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! My imagery was taken from my back yard...in the garden wild :-) Happily, though it has been getting colder, there has been no hard freeze. My flowers are still growing, but not as brilliant as they were in September. I can't believe they are still there, as well as the butterflies! <3
Date: 11/11/2021 8:45:00 PM
A delightful read and I love the part where she found momentum to fly up the garden wall. Couldn't help but smile as I read this. Cheers Anne :-)
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 11/17/2021 10:18:00 PM
:) Thank you Ann <3 ~BJ
Date: 10/26/2021 2:07:00 PM
Oh this is a fave for me. Absolutely wonderful verse. Congrats on best of new poems too. Well deserved. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/30/2021 12:56:00 AM
Thank you Judy! The photo of the garden is my garden wild. It's getting colder, and I'm going to really miss it. It was a surprise to me this year, I didn't plant it, it came back from the seed from last year! I'm so happy that it made the list of best new poems, another wonderful surprise! <3
Date: 10/17/2021 1:47:00 AM
Congratulations on this making the best new poems list!
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Date: 10/25/2021 3:54:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate you stopping by. Hope you're having a wonderful autumn season. It is my favorite time of the year :) <3
Date: 10/9/2021 8:30:00 AM
Charming and imaginative. lovely write BJ
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Date: 10/9/2021 5:22:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and uplifting comment Karen <3 I will be back to read more of your poems, I was just reading a few before checking my comments. I really appreciate your stopping by. God bless your week-end <3
Date: 10/7/2021 8:09:00 PM
Oh how magical and magnificent, BJ. On the surface this is a poem about a pretty garden and gardener, but below the surface the soulful nature of this exquisite piece gives me so much more. A metaphorical beauty, rich, inspiring and emotional. A fav!! Warmest wishes, my gifted friend.. ~Susan
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/7/2021 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan! I'm so very honored that this is a fav for you! Yes, you are right, there is a lot more to these words than the surface, of a gardener and her garden. I am blessed to have even been able to pen it after what seems forever in a terribly dry period. Thank you so much for your visit, you have no idea how blessed I am by your words <3
Date: 10/3/2021 4:37:00 AM
Ahh!! I like this one. I find so many metaphors within the lines. A very gifted work. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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Date: 10/3/2021 4:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara! I was visiting your poems yesterday. I had told my husband how you had reached out to me last year when I had just joined, and how I love your 'half a heart' poem :) It is so nice to have you stop by with your encouraging, uplifting words <3
Date: 10/2/2021 4:27:00 PM
I just love this. It's beautiful and I'm faving it. Your pen is like a warm caress, it lifts hearts and soothes souls. Love it - God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 10/2/2021 4:49:00 PM
Regina, your words uplift me and bless me so much. I had read your poem 'My Stolen Garden' and was so blessed by your beautiful eloquence of your cultured garden. I went out to my wild garden. It has been a tough year, I didn't plant it, it sprung up from last years flowers. I thought of your poem, and a Monarch flew by, literally followed by a little yellow butterfly. I thought, "Regina is the Monarch, she has inspired me. I'm the little yellow butterfly, but I will go and write my poem!" The fairy? It is the muse, the inspiration to try to write again. You are an inspiration Gina <3
Date: 10/2/2021 1:59:00 PM
Such a lovely piece so beautifully penned BJ, great rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Take care blessings , Gordon
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/2/2021 4:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon, I'm so glad you like my poem. God bless you as well!
Date: 10/2/2021 12:58:00 PM
Beautiful poetry. So much imagery. Really enjoyed it.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/2/2021 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Victor. I was over to visit your poems today, reading them to my husband. I am honored that you like my poem!
Date: 10/2/2021 6:35:00 AM
Enjoyed you poem, BJ. Splendid imagery!
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Date: 10/2/2021 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, it is good to see you! Thank you for stopping over. I'm glad you like my poem :)
Date: 10/1/2021 2:16:00 PM
This was a wonderful whimsical poem. Thank you for sharing this today
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/1/2021 9:42:00 PM
Thank you Chris, I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 10/1/2021 11:25:00 AM
How very charming are your free-spirited lines. Such fun to read, BJ.
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Date: 10/1/2021 9:41:00 PM
Thank you Jenna, I'm so glad you like my poem! <3

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