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A GALAXY ERASED

Galaxy, heart, erase, gaze, cold, tender A swirling galaxy of thought, Where feelings bloom and then are caught. My heart, a fragile, beating thing, Can soar on hope, or sharply sting. A wish to erase the memory's sting, Of words like ice, a frozen spring. Your lingering gaze, a distant star, Both near and infinitely far. A touch so tender, soft and light, Against the encroaching, endless night. Then sudden cold, a chilling breeze, Rustling through the silent trees.

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Date: 4/14/2025 7:46:00 AM
Oops... you forgot to title your poem National Poetry Month... but I loved your poem so I made an exception. The Poetry is what matters most to me not the rules...especially this minute of a detail. Thank you for entering such a lovely piece! Xo
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Laura Wooders
Date: 4/14/2025 10:06:00 AM
Thank You!!

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