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A Fun Shower

our moaning quickens
the glass on the shower door. . . . 
steams up

For SandyIvy's Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku Poetry Contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:35:00 PM

so hot

Robin Davis

Date: 5/21/2014 9:03:00 AM

Andrea I am blushing and getting steamy myself reading this. LOL Your a naughty girl. HEE HEE Thank you for the great comment on my Imagination poem. Hugs

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/15/2012 2:13:00 PM

Lol I like it Andrea congratulations ....Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 6:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 11/13/2012 8:07:00 PM

My friend Andrea, sorry for the late read of this one because of my PC problem. This is really hot and sexy haiku! A great write my friend! WARMEST CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR BIG WIN, TOO! Thanks for all your warm congratulatory comments on my winnings!. love always, LG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2012 1:48:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea, with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2012 11:48:00 AM

Congrats..Way to go..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 11/13/2012 9:36:00 AM

congrats on your win with this steamy write Andrea

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/13/2012 8:25:00 AM

What a scene! Congrats:) Jag

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2012 5:47:00 AM

ohhh...love this!!Congrats on the win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 5:27:00 AM

CONGRATS ANDREA ON A SUPER STEAMY SEXY HAIKU LUV AND GREAT WIN TOO .. RON'S CONTACTS R ALL FOGGED UP NOW AS HIS MIND IS MUSHY THINKING OF SHOWER SCENE ..SHADES OF 'THE SPECIALIST' WITH STALLONE AND SHARON STONE ..OH BOY..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2012 1:28:00 AM

Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/13/2012 1:04:00 AM

Congratulations Andy , very steamy (always a bit wary of showers after honeymoon lol)xx

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 11/12/2012 10:18:00 PM

Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/24/2012 3:36:00 PM

just love that last line, nearly as good as the second, which is nowhere as good as the first. i like you in this mood

James Fraser

Date: 7/16/2011 8:53:00 AM

Two in love in the shower, no better way for man or woman to become explorers of love. Exciting and loving Senryu Andrea, I love it. Good luck in Francine's contest, I hope this wins, it's delightful :)

Ingibo Benson

Date: 6/30/2011 11:23:00 AM

I had to read it over again to get the real message, and I laughed. I love it, so much you've said in a few words.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/30/2011 7:53:00 AM

Hot Tamales senorita Andrea ! Hell yes!

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/28/2011 2:54:00 PM

Wishing you success with this Senryu Andrea..

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/28/2011 2:14:00 PM

It does that for me too, Andrea...but I think I have the water too hot! lol! A racy write and a fun one too! Love, Robert.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/28/2011 6:39:00 AM

Lovely sensous write, Andrea

James Foulk

Date: 6/27/2011 12:00:00 PM

a very creative Senryu, enjoyed it.

Daver Austin

Date: 6/27/2011 11:32:00 AM

Just called Norman Bates. He would love to knife two for the price of one. Love, Old Dave

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/27/2011 8:52:00 AM

hot-hot-hot- steamy oh la la Andrea has everyone hot at the computer. Need to cool off with this sexy write. ha ha good one my friend. love phyl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/26/2011 5:34:00 PM

ooo la la and oooohhhhh so much more .. hot hot hot and fun fun fun all in one Andrea..now this is my kinda senryu my friend..good luck in the contest.. Francine will need a cold shower after reading this..oh..

A Fun Shower

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