A Fun Shower

our moaning quickens
the glass on the shower door. . . . 
steams up

For SandyIvy's Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:35 PM
so hot
Davis Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 9:03 AM
Andrea I am blushing and getting steamy myself reading this. LOL Your a naughty girl. HEE HEE Thank you for the great comment on my Imagination poem. Hugs
Roberts Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Lol I like it Andrea congratulations ....Seren
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Gasun Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 8:07 PM
My friend Andrea, sorry for the late read of this one because of my PC problem. This is really hot and sexy haiku! A great write my friend! WARMEST CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR BIG WIN, TOO! Thanks for all your warm congratulatory comments on my winnings!. love always, LG
A   Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Congratulations Andrea, with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd
Kendrick Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Congrats..Way to go..Sara
May Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 9:36 AM
congrats on your win with this steamy write Andrea
Nair Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 8:25 AM
What a scene! Congrats:) Jag
Poet Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 5:47 AM
ohhh...love this!!Congrats on the win!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 5:27 AM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON A SUPER STEAMY SEXY HAIKU LUV AND GREAT WIN TOO .. RON'S CONTACTS R ALL FOGGED UP NOW AS HIS MIND IS MUSHY THINKING OF SHOWER SCENE ..SHADES OF 'THE SPECIALIST' WITH STALLONE AND SHARON STONE ..OH BOY..
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 1:28 AM
Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 1:04 AM
Congratulations Andy , very steamy (always a bit wary of showers after honeymoon lol)xx
Ivy D Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 10:18 PM
Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'
Horsman Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 3:36 PM
just love that last line, nearly as good as the second, which is nowhere as good as the first. i like you in this mood
Fraser Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 8:53 AM
Two in love in the shower, no better way for man or woman to become explorers of love. Exciting and loving Senryu Andrea, I love it. Good luck in Francine's contest, I hope this wins, it's delightful :)
Benson Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 11:23 AM
I had to read it over again to get the real message, and I laughed. I love it, so much you've said in a few words.
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:53 AM
Hot Tamales senorita Andrea ! Hell yes!
Maverick Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 2:54 PM
Wishing you success with this Senryu Andrea..
Zzzzz Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 2:14 PM
It does that for me too, Andrea...but I think I have the water too hot! lol! A racy write and a fun one too! Love, Robert.
Horne Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 6:39 AM
Lovely sensous write, Andrea
Foulk Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 12:00 PM
a very creative Senryu, enjoyed it.
Austin Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Just called Norman Bates. He would love to knife two for the price of one. Love, Old Dave
Babcock Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 8:52 AM
hot-hot-hot- steamy oh la la Andrea has everyone hot at the computer. Need to cool off with this sexy write. ha ha good one my friend. love phyl
Sweetheart Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 5:34 PM
ooo la la and oooohhhhh so much more .. hot hot hot and fun fun fun all in one Andrea..now this is my kinda senryu my friend..good luck in the contest.. Francine will need a cold shower after reading this..oh..
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