A Fulani Girl's Complaint

A FULANI GIRL’S COMPLAINT


I carried water. I did all the house cores. I drove and bred the cattle one and alone, singing songs, running and climbing mountains. I milked, sold milk and bought you silk. I ground the corn and cooked your meals. I woke up on the peak of the seasons and carried duties; I did all these to be given to a wild hard-looking stranger like a cowry! 

I spent my whole youth among trees and beasts in eloquent silence away from siblings, aloof! I learned and loved God through things that spoke to me, indented, with neither paper nor pen.  I wore a strange hat and a stiff piece of cloth that fell on my knees revealing my bony legs; I had strings knotted around my waists and wrists and neck to be betrothed to a wild hard-looking stranger who swept me as if I were a cow for sale, reaped my inward garment and damned my virtue! His words are swords; his horn is a worm that eats in me, wholly! 

Oh, Aunt! You fastened my tongue and sold me like Dauda’s slave who would quit me by day leaving me starved, empty bottles and pockets in Gbaya’s tins. Aunt, don’t care the whips, the solitude, the empty stomach, the hands that hurt like electrical cords, but, my aunt, his words are worse than swords and I miss  my olden days, the twilight, the humanly beasts I forsook for the beastly human, mother’s looks that hook the heart, oh, I miss my old self!

Galim (Tignère), April 22, 2012

 Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/26/2015 3:03:00 PM
I hope that it is a call for change of certain customs in Africa and more particularly to Fulanis people. They needs to allow the girls to have a word to say on their life and not to continue to submit her to the dictatorship of past.
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Date: 11/10/2014 9:12:00 AM
Nice.
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Jaafar Sadig El Waad
Date: 11/10/2014 9:15:00 AM
thank you emeka!
Date: 11/8/2014 12:54:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jaafar - I choose your first very well written free verse - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/9/2014 8:02:00 AM
I heartily thank you for the kind words, Anne Lise Andresen! Before choosing to be part of poetry soup or the "soup family" as you beautifully put it above, I spent a few weeks reading poems and trying to understand how it functions! Thanks to members’ comments and such I hope to become more and more informed, and perhaps more prolific! Once again, thank you!
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