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A Fugitive She Never Knew

As still as night, her heart aghast, she pondered of her fellow's fairing, for word had spread of his capture. She dreamt of blooming meadows past, as butterfly spies enrapture lunch baskets and laughter sharing. Alas, now shadows are glaring. A fugitive, she never knew, throughout each lovely rendezvous, a swindler with another life abandoned children and a wife! Disheartening, the aftermath! Lo, upon their cobblestone path, a sennight long, tears filled a bath. Then yonder from the fog he came, with perplexing news to proclaim. From a journey far he'd returned, and all the while his bowels churned, consoling greiving family, yearning for her like no other. The outlaw that she thought was he, was his long estranged twin brother! 1-19-2020 Strict Rhyme and Meter Challenge Sponsor: Son Of Spock

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Date: 2/12/2020 4:57:00 AM
Very interesting story. Life is full of surprises.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 2/12/2020 8:57:00 PM
Thanks, Kai. This challenge was outside my comfort zone, and the story sort of came to me as I was searching for rhymes.
Date: 1/20/2020 3:05:00 PM
I am not sure about the rules for this contest, but you wrote a very good poem.. a bit of a twist at the end..have to be careful of twins lol..
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/21/2020 1:47:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 1/19/2020 10:22:00 PM
Juliet, your riveting poem is very enjoyable and well rhymed, and I loved the surprise twist at the end.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/20/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thanks for the encouragement, Evelyn. This rhyme scheme was a challenge for me.

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