A Friendly Deed

A friend I thought I had
When you came in smiling gaze
Stranded here I stand
Trapped in a lonely maze

A deluge in my oblivion 
Of subtle slander I miss 
And your words roll so blithely
With a sting of a Judas' kiss

I sit on the edges of morrow
And find that to me you died
But your deeds I labor to forgive
Before Hades finds out you lied 

For pain when nursed is misery
And pain set loose births harmony
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 6:09 PM
Much wisdom in this piece.
Aniagyei Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 11:45 AM
Thank you so much, Richard..... I'm honoured
La France Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 8:47 AM
Wilfred, oh I too have known such pain, why does it hurt so much when it comes from someone you thought was friend, well done poem, and thanks for visiting my poem, embarrassing moment, I do not know if I can go back to jazz, it broke my confidence and trampled my pride . . .
Aniagyei Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Such lovely words, BW...... I guess the intense friendship turns to intense pain when feelings change...... Hope u dance again though lol! Wilfred
Lindley Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 7:24 PM
Great poem my friend. Message is clear and closing verses say it all. A7
Aniagyei Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 6:25 AM
Thank you, Robert.... Enjoyed your chosen piece too
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