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A Frenchmens Hell Nothing More

A Frenchmen’s Hell Nothing More
David J Walker 

No father
            Please I pled
It was only a dream
Nothing more
 
About mesquit trees
Turning themselves into mustang ponies
Nothing more
 
Running wild and free on a drunkards horizon 
A prairie’s floor 
The fences strengthened
The three gates tightened 
hanging
post to post to post
Nothing more
 
Now
About the horse’s corral
a few paces from the barn
You could see
It was only me
Painting curses in Spanish because I knew
The obscene verses Could be far worse 
Because the Mustangs could read them
And laugh at my bad Spanish grammar
            Still
            They got the picture
 
Nothing more 
to the story except
It’s why I stayed awake past midnight
And snapped the bullwhip ever so often 
Cracking a warning into a southwest wind
Blowing warm its warning in naked numbness
 
Nothing more
            Except, father
The mustangs might win the fight and send
The souls of our stallions into a Frenchmen’s Hell
falsely claiming the birthright of the foal

 
A bleak sight
            In starlight
The dark night before
The next daylight slowly begins
Folding into a new beginning
Hiding the various meanings of freedom 
demanding variant forms to consider
as if daybreak was the dawn 
of another committee meeting
 
But father
In the dream, I become the thief in the night
Steeling a Mustang away from its herd
Calling it my own 

He hates me and I know 
he always will
He loves the way I ride like no other 
as if in stride 
With the wind and then
steal the will of the condemned 
Sending us both to a Frenchmen’s hell

Just as well
            Father
Just as well
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Lawless Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 6:18 AM
WOW....that all I can say....WOW....what a ride David.....straight into "A Frenchman's Hell". Nicely written with great use of line breaks to "punctuate" the thrill.
Walker Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Thank you, John. I'm so happy you liked it. Conflict poetry, chasing windmills... the lost cause. The Frenchman's hell..
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