A Free Gift After the Rain

Lo! A spectrum of colors In the misty cerulean sky God’s benevolent gift graciously bestowed After a light drizzle A rainbow- nature’s lovely poem Written on the widest canvas An arch spanning the Earth and the heavens A painting with colors overlapping An art created by the crystalline prisms Life expands and pulsates Eyes are raised to a vision grand Mind takes flight to Heaven’s glory A transient reminder of the beauty promised for man Warm in glow, radiant in splendor, emanating light, triggering joy, Staying amid drifting clouds, waving at us in cheer Oh eyes, feast on this celestial sight This scintillating spectral aura And get drowned in its magical spell! Hey, why not ride upon the wind To loot the pot of gold hidden at its tip! August. 15.2022 Re -submitted for Your Second Chance 1st Poetry Contest Sponsor- Sotto Poet Absolutely Anything Poetry Contest Sponsor- Shreya.LN.
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September 14, 2022 at 11:49 AM
Valsa, my Heartfelt congratulations on winning top placement in my contest. What a great piece of writing. That was something that I enjoyed reading. Blessings
George Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 8:34 PM
Thank you so much dear Lasaad for giving my poem a rebirth. In fact I too love this poem and have been slightly disappointed in not seeing it anywhere in the winner's list
Deo Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Amen and amen. Rainbows never had so many nice words said all in one poem, ever! Love it. Thx Sis
George Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Wow.... love your comment ! Glad, you enjoyed my poem and thanks a lot ! Peace and Love.
Poet Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 6:06 AM
The picturesque colors you painted on mother nature's palette were stunning. Valsa, you have an outstanding grasp of the English language. Blessings
George Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 8:06 AM
It is such a great compliment ! I feel so happy over it ! Thanks a lot dear friend ! Stay Blessed!
Leffanta Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 10:26 AM
The Rainbow Chase is one thing inviting international agreement! Enjoyed!
George Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 8:34 PM
So will we be penalized? :) :) Thank you Rico
Pandit Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 10:15 AM
A painting in words my friend. Much enjoyed the scenic hues you created on nature's canvas. You have the gift of words, Valsa.
George Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 8:32 PM
This compliment from the real Wordsmith is much appreciated ! Thanks a lot Vijay !
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Beautiful verse Valsa, I've searched but have never found it. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
George Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 8:31 PM
You mean the pot of gold....? Yes, it is a hard search Lol. Thanks much !
Buhagiar Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 8:46 AM
This is sheer beauty. Best for a win. A fave.
George Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 8:30 PM
Thanks a lot Victor. Feel honored that this has gone into your fav.
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