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A Fragile Wish

Still hope before the final petals fall and feather ~ slowly drifting to the ground; I cry within my heart a dreadful pall, myself, a hopeless painful love impound. As crimson beckons softly to cajole, I yearn the skin as smooth upon your breast, to cradle and to sooth my troubled soul and whisper words that put my mind at rest. The lonely roses pale without your lips and blossoms fade without your blushing cheeks, as colors of the day to moonlight slips I pray once more to hold the love I seek. My darling love please save me from this fate, I lie alone ~ for only you I wait.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/16/2018 10:21:00 AM
Your romantic side is filled with breath-taking beauty, Craig. Kuddos ! (Such a great sonnet writer are you !! This is your form.....for sure !!)
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Date: 8/11/2018 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Craig. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/10/2018 10:17:00 PM
Congrats craig to win on this wonderful sonnet. Warm Wishes.
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Date: 8/10/2018 10:31:00 AM
What a wonderful sonnet Craig, worthy of all honors and accolades, congrats on a fine win and POTD!
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Date: 8/8/2018 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. :)
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Date: 8/8/2018 12:10:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Intensely beautiful sonnet. :)
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Date: 8/7/2018 8:15:00 PM
Such a lovely sonnet :) So from the heart...love the line "as colors of the day to moonlight slips" well deserved POTD :)
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Date: 8/7/2018 8:03:00 PM
So beautiful, Craig! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 8/7/2018 4:37:00 PM
ohh, you really got me reeling, craig... kudos for a well deserved POTD and contest award... SOUPIE!.. huggs
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Date: 8/7/2018 4:21:00 PM
It is such a lovely poem my friend and certainly a joy to read, I wish you many congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 8/7/2018 2:01:00 PM
- Beautiful poem :) - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2018 11:48:00 AM
Craig, your sonnets always awe me. They are so well crafted and flow so beautifully. Each with depth, quality and cast in ink from a golden pen, IMHO. A fav and congratulations on POTD HONORS BESTOWED..
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Date: 8/7/2018 11:36:00 AM
Breathtaking in its superb beauty, Craig. Double congratulations on your excellent win and your well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/7/2018 10:45:00 AM
Craig, This is fantastic! A beautiful poem that flows like honey. Great job!
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Date: 8/7/2018 10:37:00 AM
Craig, another congrats from me for your beautiful Sonnet being honored as Poem Of The Day! Well-done! Sandra
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Date: 8/7/2018 10:10:00 AM
Very nice...Congratulations Craig...it's a tender poem
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Date: 8/7/2018 9:53:00 AM
Sounds so sincere, Craig, and un-contrived. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/7/2018 9:03:00 AM
Craig, congrats on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 8/7/2018 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations again Craig for POTD honors
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Date: 8/7/2018 6:16:00 AM
Back with POTD congratulations! A lovely day to you Craig! :) xomo
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Date: 8/7/2018 3:58:00 AM
Craig, back to say congrats on your well deserved POTD. John
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Date: 8/7/2018 3:31:00 AM
Congrats!!! Craig on your POTD!...beautifully written my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/7/2018 2:51:00 AM
Lovely sonnet Craig, congratulations on POTD. Tom
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Date: 8/6/2018 4:05:00 PM
A lovely, well-written Sonnet, Craig. Congratulations on your Podium placement. Sandra
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Date: 8/6/2018 3:11:00 PM
Gorgeous, Craig. The judge had good taste in the sonnet selections!
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