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A Forms and Words - Absence

Absence as I hear them calling Broken as I feel them falling Cardiac as it's stalling Darkness has me crawling Endeavoring to its installing Fevered by enthralling Giving into it appalling Heartfelt gifts sprawling Individual love is worth mauling Jointly our worth is stalling Kissing my lips, befalling Loving her, a load I'm hauling Missing us forever recalling No joy in finding the end Openness only serves to offend Patience is just pretend Quietly wanting more than a friend Reliving does not allow us to transcend Seeking solutions, don't bend Time there's none left to extend Unbelievably easy to condescend Viciousness has no way to amend Wanting left no desire to attend Xenomorphic this relationships bookend You had every chance girlfriend Zero desire is left to be penned A Forms And Words Challenge Poetry Contest 20th February 2023 Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/4/2023 7:18:00 AM

Wow. Creative abecedarian end rhyme! Congratulations on your win!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/4/2023 12:48:00 PM

Thank you so much Linda! Blessings A.S

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/2/2023 10:16:00 AM

AS, outstanding work, and many compliments on your win in my Writing Challenge - A Words and Forms. Blessings.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/2/2023 10:42:00 AM

Sotto, I want to thank you very much for sponsoring this competition I didn't know how badly I needed to write this piece until I started writing it. And to hold company with the names on this list from first place through honorable mentions is both humbling and inspiring! Warmest regards A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 2/24/2023 11:49:00 AM

Hey again. Thanks for all your commenting back to me. Loved your feedback with me on your poems.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/24/2023 12:54:00 PM

My true belief is the purpose of this website is to be both a sounding board and a means of encouragement. That is what I've taken away from it and what has been given to me from it. So anytime I can give back to the community I am more than willing to do so! Thank you very much for taking the time to read so many of my pieces A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 2/23/2023 9:56:00 AM

Wow! How did you rhyme so much?? I enjoyed reading.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/23/2023 3:18:00 PM

Truthfully with regards to the rhyme all I knew for sure when I started writing this was that I wanted to split the alphabet into two sets of 13 rhymes. The words just kind of flow out of me I know that's very undescriptive but it's the truth. I really wanted the reader of this poem to understand the turmoil that comes with divorce and break up. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it even though it is a difficult subject. Warmly A.S.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/22/2023 5:28:00 PM

You have done well, A.S with a very difficult form .

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/22/2023 6:00:00 PM

Thank you very much this I consider extremely high praise! Best Regards A.S.