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A Forgotten Relic

Her favorite dress lies gathering dust, yet in my mind, I still see her in it. My tinder-heart is set afire with love's inextinguishable, eternal flame. She lingers in the shadows of the night when she visits me in my tear-filled dreams. We had faced life's obstacles together before she died; I was never alone. The hands of time failed to lessen my grief, her passing pierces my heart every day; And I've become a forgotten relic buried under memories of my past. In truth, I'll welcome the angel of Death if by His side stands the love of my life. And as she lovingly embraces me, life's candle sputters out, and we are one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/7/2018 10:47:00 AM
Emile, this is truly an amazing piece that I enjoyed reading! You are indeed a master poet! Your imagery is outstanding and the story captivating! Congratulations on your win! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/7/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Pandita, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2018 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations, Emile. I loved your version.
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Date: 5/3/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Ralph, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2018 6:02:00 PM
Great writing, Emile. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Lainie
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:04:00 PM
Thank you Elaine, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2018 2:46:00 PM
Truly some great writing here. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:04:00 PM
Thanks Ever so much Joyce, I appreciate you visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2018 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Emile, love this heartfelt poem..
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Eve, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2018 11:49:00 AM
Dropping back to say many congratulations on your win in the contest Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2018 10:04:00 AM
Oh I got chills. So sad. Congratulations on your win. Excellent!
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Susan, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2018 7:31:00 AM
The image God gives, of our loved ones still doing their favorite things. Lovely! Congrats, Emile!
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate you visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2018 5:57:00 AM
Love your last stanza, Emile. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/14/2018 5:13:00 PM
such a touching piece Emile, the line prompts are so sad they will inspire everyone to write melancholy poems. good luck in the contest:-)hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/14/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate you visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/14/2018 11:33:00 AM
Beautiful Emile!! Very touching.. Bravo!!
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Date: 4/14/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Robertina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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