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A Forgotten Love A Poem by JC Hawkens That which I long for I left somewhere in the past My lovely fall dream When my winter came Long lost in spring was she gone My sweet sad sorrow Thinking of fall days Lost in thoughts of tomorrow May of what will come Hope of future days Beauty is she that follows Hearts mend on morrow

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Date: 4/27/2020 5:32:00 PM
The past gets us like that, for real, "if only", the "if onlies".
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Date: 5/9/2020 12:11:00 PM
I know, right. But what sweet remembrance those memories can be. And in poetic verse, what more adorable.
Date: 4/22/2020 4:28:00 AM
Hi JC Hawkens, What a beautiful metaphor. I truly enjoyed this well-penned write. Thank you for such delight this morning. And, Welcome to PoetrySoup. May we all grow together. Best of Wishes, William
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Date: 4/23/2020 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, William for the kind words, warm welcome and lovely wishes, my friend. Blessings
Date: 4/20/2020 4:16:00 PM
well, it looks like I have seen all your poems posted here for sure! Hope you write a lot more soon!
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Date: 4/23/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I will have to get back to the old pen and paper. I do appreciate all the lovely comments from you.
Date: 4/19/2020 8:48:00 AM
This is simple yet so emotional, a pleasure to ponder.
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Date: 4/19/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for these lovely comments.
Date: 4/15/2020 2:29:00 PM
A splendid write, JC--I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 4/17/2020 5:59:00 PM
Vijay, it is a delight to hear from you. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Stay safe
Date: 4/13/2020 3:07:00 PM
Well-made poem full of delightful lines. :) Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 4/14/2020 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, J.W. for this delightful comment. Stay safe my friend. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/13/2020 4:09:00 AM
What a splendid poem of all seasons! Very well-written!
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Date: 4/14/2020 3:36:00 PM
Thank you, JCB, for this beautiful comment. Stay safe, and I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/13/2020 12:52:00 AM
beautiful poetic expression on love/// lovely penning
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Date: 4/13/2020 3:58:00 AM
Thank you, Mahtab Bangalee for those lovely words, they do mean a lot to me. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/12/2020 2:29:00 PM
JC - I really like this poem of longing and HOPE! There is such a nice flow and you masterfully crafted the seasons and months into your write. Thank you for sharing it! Happy Easter!
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Date: 4/12/2020 4:16:00 PM
Thank you, Sam Kauffman, for those kind words. They are most appreciated. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. And A warm Happy Easter to you too. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/11/2020 9:26:00 PM
Such a sweet metaphor.. spring lost in winter..your poem feels love.. wishing more writing from your pen
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Date: 4/12/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, Debjani Mitra, for this beautiful comment, and your warm wishes. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/10/2020 3:18:00 AM
Love like rains mingling with the fading memories of yesterday. Lovely piece of cake my dear friend. Love and hugs!
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Date: 4/11/2020 2:54:00 PM
That my friend is a beautiful description, I had not thought of it that way. The sound of rain is a lovely thing, and now that I think back when walking in the rain, I do think of fond memories. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and the lovely comment. Stay well. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/8/2020 2:11:00 AM
love is never forgotten. It sleeps in reminiscences.
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Date: 4/11/2020 2:48:00 PM
So true love is never forgotten, especially when it was love at first sight. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for the beautiful comment. Stay well. JC Hawkens
Date: 4/5/2020 2:08:00 PM
Beautiful ...
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Date: 4/11/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Kai, for taking the time to read my poem and leave a wonderful comment. Stay safe JC Hawkens. Ps I love your name. (Kai)
Date: 1/10/2020 10:45:00 AM
This is beautiful. I love this masterpiece. Happy new year friend. Keep the lines blessing.
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Date: 1/10/2020 8:31:00 PM
Happy New Year and thank you for the wonderful words
Date: 1/5/2020 11:35:00 AM
Beautiful, JC.
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Date: 1/10/2020 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Line Gauthier, for the wonderful compliment. Happy New Year
Date: 12/3/2019 10:47:00 PM
Splendidly written JC, and you are so very right, hearts always mend on the morrow....Maria Hugs
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Date: 12/31/2019 9:08:00 AM
Maria thank you for the kind words. And so true hearts do mend on the marrow...
Date: 11/21/2019 10:56:00 PM
So beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Your thoughts hold so many moments and emotions. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/22/2019 6:27:00 PM
Thank you. I really appreciate the comment. I read tranquility just recently. Wow, that was amazing. So beautifully scribbled. Again Thank you.
Date: 11/21/2019 8:27:00 PM
I really like this, JC. A bit melancholy, which fall poetry makes me feel!
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Date: 11/22/2019 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Fall is one of my favorite seasons. And it makes me feel a little melancholy too. Thank you for the compliment. And I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/18/2019 6:32:00 PM
To be interested in the changing seasons is a happier state of mind than to be hopelessly in love with spring. Your love is within you...
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Date: 11/19/2019 4:31:00 AM
Thank you. Something to think about. I do appreciate the comment.
Date: 11/18/2019 4:06:00 PM
Very lovely verse here, JC. I like your minimalist approach...this almost sounds like haiku to me! :)
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Date: 11/18/2019 4:18:00 PM
Thank you. I do enjoy the haiku form. But I just don't want to be limited to 3 lines. Again Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 11/17/2019 5:26:00 PM
Hi J.C. this piece is exquisite. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 11/17/2019 8:10:00 PM
Thank you for the comment. I do appreciate it. And thank you for taking the time to read it.
Date: 11/17/2019 5:23:00 PM
beautifully penned, sometimes we fall and await the winds of time to life us back up again... hugs
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Date: 11/17/2019 8:13:00 PM
Thank you very much. I've only just started so feel free to read any of my others. Any input including critical would be welcomed.