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For the Stars Or Home Poetry Contest of Ink Empress

A Forgotten Home

See me here in this yard of tangled weeds where I sit far back and watch the passers-by with a sinking feeling as I settle into ground. Kids throw rocks, smashing my windows, then run off crying out I’m haunted. They’ve dimmed my eyes. My painted skin, once pretty, is peeling. My fixtures are broken; my floors cracked. I smell decay all around me. Old letters cram my mail box. No longer a home with the soothing sounds of family, I am just the bones of one.
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Dronsfield Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 12:12 PM
A wonderful write my friend. Congratulations on your placement!!
Jones Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 8:59 AM
Back to say a big congratulations on your win!
Empress Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 8:35 AM
Ah sweet andrea This is so moving and youv done storytelling so well even in this form and shown us through your words, by so very vividly painting imagery, i love the opening three lines and the ending line is just brilliant! As I love! Pleasure reading you today. Thank you for writing. Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2026 at 9:58 AM
Thank you very much. I loved your theme, Ink.
Crandall Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 8:47 PM
You capture the mood of a forgotten home. I'm going to send you a link from a movie that this reminds me of if I can find it.
Hind Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 9:35 PM
this seems so sad,, it has a lot of depth and honesty
Kerr Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 10:04 PM
Andrea, I was overwhelmed by this exceptional etheree. It evokes sympathy and compassion. Good luck with it, Howard
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 8:00 PM
Chilling.... and effective. ~ gw
Rolland Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 6:17 PM
i love so much your creativity, the ending is quite emotional, than you so much poet
Jones Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 5:54 PM
Wow! This is very creative Andrea! I especially liked the line, “ My painted skin, once pretty, is peeling.” A great contender for the contest. Best wishes!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 5:10 PM
fantastic job on this form.....engaging and sad....
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 4:05 PM
Wow!! This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I like the descriptiveness in it very much. I like those older homes and always home someone will fix them up and bring them back to their glory. Sara K
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 3:32 PM
wonderful personification Andrea, it made me feel quite emotional :-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:28 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "A Forgotten Home" write/story. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a Beautiful/Blessed Day writing away.............
Bauer Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 12:27 PM
a sad but very touching poem, andrea! beautifully expressed...
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