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A forbidden love

Adam was in his late 50s and Jean was younger than him by 27 They both had a lot in common, they saw life as if they were in heaven They spent most of their time together talking, he felt happy in her presence and she felt safe by his side Jean had strong feelings for Adam, her affection is something that she did not want to hide But Adams affection for Jean was not at all of that kind As time went by, Jean found herself madly in love with Adam, but Adam was not aware of this love Then came the day when she could no longer bare the pain of love, to Adam she graciously opened her heart Adam felt her sincere pure love for him, but he asked himself is this love a crime He knew then that this was not infatuation, but deep feelings flowing from her heart They both came from a different place of worship, and the difference in age was a start She made him feel young again, her youth gave him a spark of life By now Adam was deep under the spell of love, his heart and mind were already in prisoned by her charm This is when their long bitter struggle began, as their love by their cults was deemed forbidden Saleh Ben Saleh

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Date: 1/9/2024 1:33:00 PM
Saleh, a read of absence. The future affairs of the heart-beholden interest is love while the past mind-beholden interest is of societal affairs. A tangled weave realized, what tethers the course of the web, reverse or advance. Whatever fills the air is a breath that will be theirs. Aloha from Hawaii, William
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Date: 1/9/2024 8:41:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely words, that hold deep meaning. In this story, both the interests of the heart and the mind are tangled together leaving their future at the mercy of society. Thank you William
Date: 1/8/2024 10:59:00 PM
Engaging and interesting. I am left wondering what happened or if they followed their hearts. Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:04:00 PM
Thank you for reading and your kind words. There is more to the story, but the poem will get out of hand. Thanks Karen

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