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A Fond Remembrance

We became lovers in a youthful world Where love's elation flowed forever free And allowed untamed fervor to unfurl In a sphere of change to young to see Could all our shades and shadows have been known When we held tight in our love's embrace To know we could only reap what was sown From windswept furrows, we could not replace Now in these years of twilight thoughts are pure I welcome the world we both looked upon When we touched the face of love so unsure Until the moment came when it was gone You are a memory a lasting gift A fond remembrance, that I will die with 3/26/21

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/25/2021 12:46:00 PM

Hi Frederic, What a well written poignant, and touching write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 4/25/2021 9:49:00 AM

Very touching love story beautifully penned!!

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 4/23/2021 8:27:00 PM

Dear Mr. Parker, Such a subtle and beautiful statement of words depicting the unsureness of hearts in the excercise of loving. So humanly vulnerable and you bring it home with this full bodied pen. Love it so much Fred. Hope you are well and happy. Always your fan. Lonna

Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2021 5:49:00 AM

yes Lonna, a moment we have all shared with someone, unsureness is truly the correct word, dear poet

George Yiorgos Stathakis

Date: 4/23/2021 8:22:00 PM

A very moving poem Frederic. Congratulations!

Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2021 5:46:00 AM

thank you George for your kindness

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/23/2021 12:32:00 PM

OMG this is so moving and beautiful Freddie! I am in tears, weeping for the lost loves of youth that had such profound changes upon my life. They will never be forgotten. I only wish I could Fave this ten times! POTD material for sure. The romantic music enhanced your wonderful words. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Thank you for making me cry. Love, Connie xxoo

Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2021 5:45:00 AM

Connie, the warmth and kindness of your reply welcomes my day, thank you, dear poet

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/23/2021 11:21:00 AM

Congratulations!

Frederic Parker
Date: 4/24/2021 5:43:00 AM

thank you Christuraj

John Hamilton

Date: 4/23/2021 10:04:00 AM

Your talent soars high with this wonderful write, congrats Frederic on another top win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/28/2021 3:28:00 PM

A delightful, romantic write, Frederick! congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/28/2021 3:34:00 PM

thank you Kim for your kind remark

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/27/2021 8:05:00 AM

So beautiful Frédéric. I like the line , ...when we touched the face of love so unsure... This poem certainly takes the reader back with you to a wonderful time, held onto forever. :)

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/27/2021 11:05:00 AM

Thank you Heidi, I believe we all have someone we remember fondly

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/27/2021 6:55:00 AM

How delightful, Frédéric. Your romantic sonnets speak of one who had treated true love

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/27/2021 11:04:00 AM

Thank you my friend, so glad to see you back

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/26/2021 6:09:00 PM

Dear poet, dear friend, oh how I so enjoy your creative heart and soul so full of twilight romantic musing.. you bring me to the center of your poetic being with the wistful beauty of time-gentled passion. A great musical choice as well, I have always loved "The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face". A breathtaking poetic presentation, Frederic. Your poetry soars! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/26/2021 6:24:00 PM

I am blessed by your truly kind response to my poem, Susan...may peace be with you dear poet,dear friend

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/26/2021 3:43:00 PM

Love these lines: Could all our shades and shadows have been known/ When we held tight in our love's embrace

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/26/2021 5:16:00 PM

Thank you Kim for your kind remarks