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A Fly on the Wall

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Andrea Dietrich

December 14, 2025 at 11:00 PM

Hahaha. Splat!

sara Etgen-Baker

December 7, 2025 at 4:59 PM

Ha!

Ann Peck

December 6, 2025 at 2:17 PM

Enough said!

Gershon Wolf

December 4, 2025 at 9:00 PM

Ha, ha ha, ha, ha. Delightful, John. Is 'Splat' coming next? Honest, I haven't looked. Probably I'm wrong though.

Suzette Richards

December 3, 2025 at 10:08 PM

Your minimalist approach to the subject is refreshing, John. That single word carries the weight beautifully, deflecting the tension away from the top-heavy title. However, I suspect that AI had a hand it as it is its wont to take things literally and missed the point of the idiom. ... hie hie hie (satire)

Karen Jones

December 3, 2025 at 3:12 PM

Lol

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