A Fly on the Wall

On the ceiling (or under the ceiling) the fly went for a walk.
Thousands of his eye-lenses flashed at the scene below:
Secret handshakes, paper-bags, signalled deals, muffled talk.

On the table, over the platter, with his six thin feet for taste,
Puking and sucking jewelled berries, and ten gold apples of youth,
He observed the ice-bucket’s potential to collect the retching waste.

A fly on the wall, approaching the window, he planned to slip and tell;
But, the heat, the glare, the greed, the airless room
Sent him in circles, a swoon, a spiral.  He fell.

A dead spy on the window sill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Naidu Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 8:01 AM
Good work
Swan Avatar
January 14, 2026 at 2:10 AM
Thanks Shivani. Appreciated. J :)
Miller Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 7:21 AM
This made me chuckle, congratulations
Swan Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 2:16 AM
Thanks Terry :)
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Sara K
Swan Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Thanks Sara :)
Jones Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 5:13 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win!
Swan Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Thanks Karen :)
Richards Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 2:49 AM
Congratulations, Jeanette, on your 3rd place win. Your satire is strong—it really leans into the idiom and gives it teeth.
Swan Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 2:52 AM
Thanks Suzette. It was a fun prompt:)
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 11:35 AM
Good bug in the end (he was dead). I enjoyed this one. Very creative and descriptive work you have penned for the contest. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 8:26 PM
Wow. So creative how you reacted to this prompt. Very nice!
Swan Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 3:07 AM
Thanks Andrea, appreciate your encouragement :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 5:45 PM
totally creative...loved " he planned to slip and tell." What a delightful contest engry. hugs, Sara
Swan Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 5:57 PM
Thanks Sara. It is a fun prompt. J :)
Jones Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 5:43 AM
Enjoyed the humor and engaging read! Good luck in the contest!
Swan Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Thanks Karen, it was a topic I'd never have thought of myself :)
Mo Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 5:16 AM
Lol. Lets call this one a fly on the ceiling. Enjoyed this piece. All the best in the contest
Swan Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Thanks Marugu. ' on the ceiling' it is!
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