A Flutter In My Soul One Day

A flutter in my soul one day wanted to be heard.
It made me want to play with words so I could help it fly.
In freeing it, I helped it sing like a lovely bird.
It wanted then to soar. One can’t keep a songbird from the sky!

It made me want to play with words so I could help it fly.
To give it wing, I added grace of rhythm and of rhyme.
It wanted then to soar. One can’t keep a songbird from the sky!
Alliteration lifted it and made its flight sublime.

To give it wing, I added grace of rhythm and of rhyme.
Bright it was! Lucidity it had been given too.
Alliteration lifted it and made its flight sublime.
Hard I thought about what I wanted it to do.

Bright it was! Lucidity it had been given too.
Which sentiments or thoughts of mine would my poem show?
Hard I thought about what I wanted it to do.
Would it fly in a rain of tears or in sunshine’s glow?

Which sentiments or thoughts of mine would my poem show?
In freeing it, I helped it sing like a lovely bird.
Would it fly in a rain of tears or in sunshine’s glow?
A flutter in my soul one day wanted to be heard.

Dec. 7, 2022 
For L. Milton Hankins'  Pantoum On Writing Poetry Poetry Contest
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Warlov Avatar
December 10, 2022 at 2:39 AM
A call from majesty to majesty ~ the heightening of the heart sublime ~ "One can't keep a songbird from the sky"
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December 10, 2022 at 3:06 AM
Canerdy Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 6:07 AM
Excellent use of metaphors and similes, very descriptive, Andrea. Janice
George Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Wow.... wonderful ! Your bird will fly free in sunshine and rain ! Beautiful Pantoum. I am sure this poem will be placed high ! All the Best Andrea !
Daniel Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 8:34 PM
Lovely, Andrea, I love the first line:)
Poet Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 3:33 PM
This is a fantastic Pantoum, Andrea. I hope that the contest goes well for you. I really enjoy it from the very first line to the very last one. Actually, this form is one of my favorites to use.
Babcock Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 1:46 PM
Wow Andrea this is great. I wish you good luck in the contest. I love the last line in this. Reminds me how we all get a flutter to pick up a pen and write. I like the way you compare it to a bird. Well written. love phyl
Parker Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 1:42 PM
Poetry it is and birds fly they do...soulful, AD. ~;o)
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