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A flower in armour



A shy flower tries to bloom
under the heavy showers,
the cold, frost and the season.

It isn't her time to be shown,
but she fights to have her chance. 
On a green bush she displays her beauty against the unpredictable, with her tenacity.

A hard pink flower survives 
day after day fighting with the
elements trying to defeat her.

A beautiful flower in armour
has a focus in her life,
She blooms when she likes,
not for the others' surprise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:22 PM
As does a fine lady. Maria. Beautiful picture of the frost laden rose, and excellent imagery in this poem. A FAV for my list! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your lovely poetry, my friend. Hugs, Bill
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:36 PM
Hey my Texan poet friend.I really appreciate all your kind words that mean a lot to me. Thanks for the fav too. I'm glad you passed by my little corner. Hugs for you and your lovely heart Saraxxx
D. Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:06 AM
Beautifully written! Intelligent!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Hello Lynn. Thank you so much for stopping by and your comment. Have a nice day!
Ebbs Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 2:18 PM
I get it... in some way an armor can protect the flower until the flower is ready to bloom. Good Job, Ed
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 2:44 PM
Hey Ed, good job. Nice you pass by and read it . What a nice surprise. The flower in her armour means, she feels ready to fight against the whole world, because she was born with the armour to fight. Thank you for your lovely comment
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