A Flower Blooms

While traveling ‘cross such harsh terrain 
     left parched and barren from the sun 
   and weeks without a cooling rain,
       I saw a sight that left a stun
     beside the road on this long run.

I stopped to have a closer look;
     perhaps my vision had deceived 
   with image that my mind mistook
       and merely something I perceived, 
     but I would never have believed.

Yet there a single flower bloomed
     upon the dry and sun parched soil.
   Impossible I had assumed 
       with harsh conditions to embroil;
     to stay alive, how she must toil.

Her face shown fair in sun’s dry heat
     magenta petals shining bright 
   appearing happy and upbeat
       without a worry to incite,
     and unaware of her dire plight.

I ponder how one could exist
     in harsh conditions such that be
   and thrive with little to assist,
       yet ne’er for help to send a plea;
     she seems to live her life carefree.

Perhaps we all should take a clue 
     from gentle flower’s look on life
   ignoring hell we’re going through 
       with all its worry and its strife,
     and all the bad with which it’s rife,

       and focus on our gifts in life.


April 7, 2021


Poem of the Week - April 11, 2021
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Flynn Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Nice upbeat job John....
Gondolf Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 7:26 AM
Thanks, Paul, I appreciate it. John
Kaufman Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Oh wonderful words of advise for all of us to heed, thank you John. Congratulations on your win.
Gondolf Avatar
July 15, 2021 at 2:47 AM
Thank you, Nancy, I appreciate it. John
Zahid Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 6:36 PM
That's beautiful... Great message! Enjoyed reading it.
Gondolf Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 2:10 AM
Thanks so much, Paghunda, I appreciate your comments and visit. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Wiggett Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 6:11 AM
:) I love this :) Your words are beautiful John, they shine like a beacon of hope in the darkness :) Truly stunning:)
Gondolf Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Thank you so much for you kind words, Melody, I'm glad you enjoyed my simple thoughts. John
Fleming Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Inspiring sentiment, John...I can understand why you were so compelled to try and put in into words. You did a pretty decent job! My very best regards -- cheers! :) john
Gondolf Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 5:15 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, John, I appreciate it.
Lawrence Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 9:11 PM
Just beautiful John ... I love it ! The messages you send through your melodic phrases sing . I can see the lone flower now .. thriving and strong living her life carefree ! And yes that last line . So true .. so simple .. so profound . Congratulations on POTW ! All the best , Susan :-)
Gondolf Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:13 AM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Susan, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Peck Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 9:03 AM
I love this! So very beautiful, John.
Gondolf Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 6:12 AM
Thank you, Ann, I appreciate it.
Roper Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 8:46 PM
Congratulations on your win, John. Hugs Eve
Gondolf Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 2:47 AM
Thank you so much, Eve, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Mcintosh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Congrats on this wonderful poem. This is brilliant. I love it so. God bless you... It's a fave for me. Love, Gina
Gondolf Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Gina, they mean so much to me. And thank you for saving this poem to your favorites. Hugs, John
Alex Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations!
Gondolf Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, Christuraj, I appreciate it.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 10:41 PM
Flawless streaming of engaging phrases, John, a fantastic achievement, my gratitude for your participation and compliments for your win, Aloha!
Gondolf Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 2:11 AM
Thank you, William, I appreciate the kind comments, and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Makama Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 6:08 PM
surreal, enticing, true and sensual. It is so beautiful to read and you cannot just get enough of its flaire. Great work John.
Gondolf Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 1:59 AM
Thank you so much, Funom, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 5:56 PM
This poem is incredible John. Congratulations on having it honored for POTW. So well crafted including a valuable message. Blessings xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 2:20 AM
Thank you so much, Connie, I appreciate it. John
Fenn Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 9:44 PM
Oh what powerful lessons are taught by things as simple as a little flower. Well written poem, and congrats on POTW.
Gondolf Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 5:12 AM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Jennifer, I appreciate it. Hugs, john
Y. Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 6:43 AM
Hi John, Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Gondolf Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis, I appreciate it. John
Hankins Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 7:20 PM
Very fine poem, John. Congratulations on your selection as POTW!
Gondolf Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:33 AM
Thank you, Milton, I appreciate it. John
Ashley Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Indeed! I admire the golden light of revelation and appreciation that shines through the lyrical metaphorical beauty of this amazing poem, John. You last line is a gem! To surrender worries and allow one's heart to bloom with joy and love despite adversity is something to aspire to.. Congratulations for your well-deserved and worthy recognition with POTW honors. Your gifted pen is ever brilliant, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gondolf Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:28 AM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Susan, I am always humbled by your kind words. With all the bickering going on in the world today I thought a reminder to be thankful for our blessings was in order. Best wishes my dear friend. John
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 9:36 PM
This outstanding poem delves deep with its profound metaphoric message John. I simply loved it! It is so nice to see it being honored for POTW! Congratulations my friend. It is definitely a keeper I am putting into my Faves! Blessings xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Connie, I appreciate it. And thanks for saving it to your favorites. Hugs , John
Seeker Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 1:11 AM
Deep spherical vision indeed, John! Congrats on POTD!
Gondolf Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 2:19 AM
Thank you so much, I appreciate it. John
La France Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 1:11 AM
John, congratulations on POEM OF THE WEEK with this beautifully penned poem, love _Constance
Gondolf Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 2:19 AM
Thank you, Constance, I appreciate you and your support. Hugs, John
Daniel Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 9:59 PM
A beautiful poem with lovely advice, John, congratulations on your POTW:)
Gondolf Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 2:16 AM
Thank you so much, Jo, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Nicole Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:12 PM
I am focusing on "our gifts in life" Blessings truly are everywhere. Sometimes, in the middle of moments that are beyond our control. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Week. Your Words Shine. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 2:15 AM
It is the little moments in life that help us get past the moments that are beyond our control. Thank you for always supporting me, Brandy. Hugs.
Hankins Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your POTW...truly deserving.
Gondolf Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 2:10 AM
Thank you, Milton, I appreciate it. John
Goldsmith Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. What a wonderful write. If only we could be more like the flowers we would be better off. Have a blessed day/week with your win..............
Gondolf Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 2:10 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Paula, flowers bring only beauty and joy to the world. John
Pandit Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Enjoyed this metaphoric write, John. BIG congrats on poem of the week.
Gondolf Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Thanks, Vijay, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
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