A Flower

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A flower that has once lived and aged
With all of life's opportunities engaged
Then lost its petals and its scent
Waits stilled, extends its lessons of life waged

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Constance La France

Date: 1/6/2023 9:36:00 AM

Sara, wonderfully penned poem, well done (I sent you a soupmail today) Constance

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/6/2023 12:15:00 PM

Thank you, Constance. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/5/2023 10:13:00 AM

A beautiful reminder to live life to it's fullest... It was nice to read about a lovely spring flower when we are right in the middle of the cold winter... Very well written, Sara...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/5/2023 10:58:00 AM

Thank you, Kelly. I appreciate the visit and kind review. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 12/31/2022 7:23:00 PM

Crystallized observation of life, its budding, blooming and finally its withering and the lesson it leaves. Enjoyed your poem dear Sara. Happy New Year!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/1/2023 1:53:00 PM

Valsa, Thanks you for the New Year's greeting and for the nice review of my work. Sara

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/28/2022 4:20:00 AM

A beautifully penned piece Sara, so much meaning portrayed, in the end sometimes all we have left to pass on, are our own lessons in life, cheers David

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2022 7:19:00 AM

Thank you, David. I appreciate the visit. Sara