Premiere Contest WinnerA Flow In My Heart

I can say so many things that can make you happy and so many things that can 
make you sad.

But one thing that is for sure is how I feel for you I have just acknowledged 
everything about you.

I don't want this to end I want to be more than just your friend I want to feel you 
and share all that life has to offer.

Seeing you is more than a treasure but a reward in the making something that I 
cannot take for granted.

Something that I must cherish and embrace I hope that is with you.

I cannot say how much I feel for you and want you I wish that I can share more 
with you.

I wish it wasn't so hard for me to open my heart to you I wish that the feelings 
were so close.

I want to love you and embrace you so much but you are so precious that I can't 
imagine damaging something that is so good.

I cannot even imagine wasting it on junk I hope and pray that one day we can be 
together and I will not be afraid.

No fear and no pain in me a love that is so real and uncondititonal I know that I am 
not perfect.

I know that I am not a saint but please allow me to be the best that I can be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Carmack Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Congrats on taking first place in Nayda's contest.
Smith Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Congratulations Quondrreika, well done...
Raven Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Hi Quondreika, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
Lane Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations on the winning write.
Raina Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on your top placement!
Haight Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Such a beautiful poem that embraces hope. Congratulations on your top of the podium win, Quondreika! Sandra
Dalei Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on ur top win. Every line is enriched with literature. Enjoyed...........hugs
Eastman Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations as #1 in the Hope Poetry Contest. You made a great piece of art.
Devnath  Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your great win. Loved always, bl
Negron Flores Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations on the first placement of the contest Quondreika. A beautiful poem.
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 11:23 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Quondreika. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 6:22 PM
Very thoughtful and expressive thoughts penned well, Qoundreika
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