A Flame You Lit

A Flame You Lit
		

     			    I hear 
			       your voice 
			          calling from
			            verses long penned
			                as swift it passes
				        through and a flame 
					  lights in my heart’s 
					     hearth and within 
					       that space I write         											              
					      of the accursed poet
                                           whose spirit still in a slow 
				       but steady pendulum beat,
				   through time moves, and 
			      I bathe in the magic of its swing;
			   many are now dust but your
			ballads are not gone from 
			the flavor of the hour,
			 from the ashes 
			   of your 
			   name
			    Villon
		            one sip
               and your pen dipped in the mire 
               pulling on the leash sniffing for 
	      traces of life, to our hunger still 
            speaks, hanging in spiraling smoke, 
	     still vibrates like winter’s wind on
    	    the prowl, mocks the stars, animates
            the flowers of the night, and howls.

	

François Villon is a French poet who was born in 1431, the year Joan of Arc 
was burned at the stake. As a student of the University of Paris, he participated 
in many brawls and pranks. He even killed a priest (he was defending himself 
from the man’s attack, picked up a rock and accidently killed him) and was 
granted full pardon. He was later imprisoned and tortured, but released 
by the new king Louis XI. He ended up ‘exiled’ from Paris for 10 years
His ‘Testament’ will forever live on. He fascinates me because he reminds 
me of my younger brother, a bright star who had a dark glow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pasky Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 1:46 PM
This is a very well-structure piece. A pleasure to read.
Coreggia Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Thank so much for your comments Forrest. I am glad you liked it.
Vaso Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 4:04 PM
I am at a loss for words, this poem is so beautiful, not to mention I love historical writes, especially concerning the history of France. This is a super Fav for me!!
Coreggia Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 7:12 AM
Cher Arthur, I am deeply touched by your response. Poets will always sing the most marvelous songs about love and nature but I think that poetry is an ideal medium to awaken or even sharpen our interest in art (and you surely did that), history, philosophy, and music:)
Pinet Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Like a moth to a flame you seduce us with the heat of you words and lure us with their purity. I warmed to your words in the light they where offered, and it felt good to hear a voice from the past come to life. Emile.
Coreggia Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Emile, my words cannot truly express my appreciation for such a wonderful review. Thank you my friend. I am so glad you felt his presence still casting a flame; it seems his words are still calling to us through the ages.
Ricci Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 10:48 AM
Good Morning Anne Marie. My goodness. Your level of talent is top level. Your words are very expressive. Your formatting and layout is exceptional. I know the time and input it takes to execute such an entry. You deliver attention to detail. Just your first two lines alone not to mention the title are all poetic. And yes, allow me to say this is an entry to be read out loud. Thank you for the education also. Well done in its entirety. Have a wonderful day.
Coreggia Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Bonjour Lisa, how can I ever thank you for such a review. I have learned a lot from you and many like you who never cease to inspire me. Thank you again my friend and I can't wait to see you on your page with the seagulls, the ocean, a shining star, whatever your mind embraces and sends our way:)
Krampe Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 1:19 PM
I went and read some Villon, and the ballad is truly outstanding. I found it extremely interesting that I could read the 15th century French; the language does not seem to have changed as dramatically as English. Is that so, or is it only that my poor French does not let me notice the difference? (I mean, there are words I don't know, and I can't tell whether that's because they are archaic, or because my vocabulary is not good.) May I ask why you prefer English? I find French very beautiful.
Coreggia Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 5:23 PM
I had the same reaction you did when I first read the 15th century text Agnes; I was shocked to see that some passages were quite easy to understand whereas others had me stumped. I was a Foreign Language major in H.S. & college (English, German, latin, Spanish, even a smattering of Chinese), and English always was my first love . . . 50% of the songs on the radio were in English when I was growing up. Also, I'm a gypsy at heart and love to travel, so English was the obvious language of choice.
Williams Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 7:10 AM
What a great expose of this poet. Thank you for sharing it - the flame image in words is brilliant - A definite 7 on all counts Anne Marie.
Coreggia Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 11:27 AM
Maria, your comments are greatly appreciated as always my friend:)
White Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 5:35 AM
As I said in reply to your question below, yes I speak French :) J'ai vécu en France.... deux ans, plus ou moins.... I read my Beaudelaire, Verlaine et Rimbaud in French, my passive knowledge is fine. I do know my active French isn't perfect, but it's enough to get me going.
Coreggia Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 5:06 PM
Je comprends ce que tu veux dire Darren parce que j'ai fait six ans d'allemand et trois ans de latin, mais il n'en reste pas grand chose (not much) parce que je ne les utilise pratiquement jamais:)
White Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Oui, et aussi le néerlandais, l'allemand, et l'ancien langage Latin. But, as I said, my active control over the language isn't as good as my passive. It's handy :)
Coreggia Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Tu parles donc l'anglais, l'arabe, le français, l'espagnol je présume et quelles autres langues? I am seriously impressed that you are reading them in French, Darren, but I'm glad because so much is lost in translation.
Krampe Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Wonderful poem, Anne-Marie. The concrete form is well executed, and you inspired me to go read some Villon. I think I am familiar with the name, but don't recall any of his work. Are you bilingual? You mention writing on a French site. I love French, but despite many efforts to learn, my French is not very good; I can read, but not carry a conversation.
Coreggia Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 11:18 AM
Bonjour Agnes, je te remercie pour tes commentaires si chaleureux. Je suis française mais la langue que je préfère est l'anglais:)
Smith Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 3:48 PM
Very awe-inspiring Anne-Marie...you are very talented
Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 9:33 PM
Thank you Tim but truly the talent lies with my subject matter:)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 3:29 PM
I agree w/Darren ... you have a fascinating way w/words, Anne-Marie. Beautiful prose and image. Stellar poetry at its best. A sure-fire 7. Love always.
Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Un grand merci Freddie for your very supportive comments:)
Allison Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Wow Anne-Marie I think this is the most intriguing concrete poem I have ever read - thank you for the detailed information and bringing this poet to my notice... i actually got a tingle down my spine with the flame like shape and his sad death:-( hugs jan xx
Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Glad you liked it Jan. His father was actually hung for thievery but we don't know exactly how Villon died because his sentence was commuted and he was exiled from Paris.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 2:22 PM
Wonderful write Anne-Marie, I will have to look up Villon, I'm not familiar with him or his work but am awfully intrigued now :) xomo 7
Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 9:16 PM
Thank you Maureen. I'm so glad you are thinking about looking him up. His 'Ballad of the Hanged Men' is one of his most famous works.
Fields Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 10:01 AM
the poem made me feel the admiration for the French poet François Villon and the love of a brother
Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 9:09 PM
The admiration for François Villon is undeniably there Verlecia. I am in absolute awe at some of his later poems.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 9:39 AM
A wonderful concrete poem!
Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 9:06 PM
Thank you for your visit and your kind comment Kim.
White Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Beautiful Anne-Marie, great concrete!!! And it is a wonderful poem too, as all your poems are, you have such a way with words. I love the little explanation below the poem too. Time to me to go and read some Villon! I am inspired to, now.
White Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 11:36 PM
Mais oui je comprends, j'ai vécu en France. I know my French isn't perfect, but it's only one of about 6 languages I speak and write.
Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 9:05 PM
You are so nice Darren, and I am excited that it inspired you to look up his poems. Au fait (by the way), Est-ce que tu parles français ou bien est-ce que tu comprends un peu le français?
Green Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Such an enticing, creative and incredible poem Anne Marie. And not only because of the shape you amazingly crafted with your words but the feeling of the poem itself. It sent my mind on a journey that it didn't want to come back from. Love the notes too, that is very interesting. beautiful done my friend.
Coreggia Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 8:58 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Chris. The truth is I had just posted a long poem about Villon on a French site but there was still something stirring in me, so I decided to let it out in another language.
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