A Flame Once Burned

I know that we must surely part
Another shines within your heart
The closeness gone, the magic dead
Your love belongs to her instead

The tears I shed, unseen, unheard
And once you hung on every word
Resigned, I see I lost the fight
Our love won’t last another night

Usurped, I toss my ring away
It’s pointless begging you to stay


Jack Horne, 3rd December, for Gail's a Flame once burned contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 3:29 PM
hmmm Since you are a man writing this line 4 makes me want you to put HIM and you know how I LOVE sonnets..this is begging to be a sonnet [tickle] I know you can! Congrad's on your win. Happy hoildays. Light & Love
Posey Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:42 AM
Well crafted and worthy of winning. I am humbled by your entry.... Jake
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:36 PM
You are just writing poems under my nose and I am not seeing them till now. WAY to GO. I see this won her contest, jack. Congratulations.
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December 10, 2012 at 3:50 PM
Jack, Congratulations with your awesome win in the "A Flame Once Burned " contest... always~PD
Arowolo Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:27 PM
Beautiful lovely write,Jack....Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...Ride on,brother....
Johnson Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Congrats jack! Just about perfect. I say just about, come on, nobody's perfect. :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:32 AM
Big congratulations Jack, awesome write, love it xx
Macfarlane Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 7:54 AM
A touching heartfelt write Jack! Hugs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 7:16 AM
Oh so sad Jack poetic license one hopes xx
A   Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 11:11 PM
Hello Jack, wow.... this is deep...especially when the marriage is not worth working out... always~pd
Wesley Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 6:42 PM
A brilliant write Jack, the sorrow is real and makes me feel sorry for you but the win you will have makes me feel better! Luv, Lizzie
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 3:20 PM
Great love loss work..Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
La France Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Jack, your poem is a sure winner, just wonderful. Constance
Sweetheart Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 5:22 AM
simply gracious and touching laced with deep emotion Jack luv .. made me shed a tear or two .. much luck in contest .. we r all hanging in there .. baby and parents leaving Jan. 8th ..oh I miss them already .. hope u and Sue r doing fine .. congrats on baby news of Kate and William .. was all over our news last evening ..
Sivey Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 3:28 PM
Wow, what an awesome meter and rhyme my friend! You put this together magnificently Jack! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening and sad poem this evening! You have written a marvelous piece here, Great Work!!
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