Premiere Contest WinnerA Flame Once Burned

A flame once burned so brightly everything in sight seemed quite beautiful in its blinding light. Everything I took for truth once upon a time seemed to me more glorious; love seemed more sublime. Then the fire began to die. Every little flaw I began to clearly see till I’d seen it all. Half a lifetime and the flame still is burning out. As it dims, I am learning what life is about. But the happy medium I had come upon soon will flicker less and less. Going….. Going…. Gone. When my flame goes nearly out, will there come a pall? In the darkness that will come - will I see at all? How I miss those days of yore - passion of my youth - when a flame once burned, and I thought I knew of truth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Haight Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 11:21 AM
Goosebumps for me too, Andrea...beautiful in its sadness. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win. Hugs, Sandra
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January 1, 2017 at 4:52 AM
Goosebumps.. I so miss the passion of my youth Andrea...I do.Such a beautiful poem...I can relate to.A fave.Happy New Year Sweetheart.
Nusker Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 11:05 AM
From start to finish, it's really engaging. I loved the use of metaphors so perfectly. Congrats! A 7
Kundu Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:27 AM
It's always curious how wisdom runs parallel to age. Awell-deserved win, Andrea!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 4:44 AM
Wow! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Mohn Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 12:12 AM
I am so glad I had the chance to read this earlier poem of yours Andrea...I could feel your words...congrats to you on this 1st place
Grasso Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 11:50 PM
A well-deserved trophy win with this beautiful write, Andrea! Congratulations! ...Fran
Wolf Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 11:36 PM
I think your flame burns brighter than most! A great win with an awesome poem, Andrea!
Dom Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Congratulations on your win. :-)
Bauer Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 6:49 PM
brilliant and so deserving of your win!
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April 18, 2014 at 3:43 PM
Oi, I almost forgot the reason I dropped by... Andrea, thank you so much for entering my simple contest, with your awesome poem... ... by the way I have something to say to all who supported my ANY POEM # 19 contest. Shame on me, Shame on me! Please forgive me, for not taking the time, to CONGRATULATE and adore all the winning poems for a second or third time. I AM VERY LATE:(-- I was a little mad at the world. However, this is my winning list, I will give everyone the same love and support. I'm dropping by with a Copy Paste note from the bottom of my heart. I am sorry, it's not like me, to walk away, as if nothing. Truly, I appreciate every winning poem, and HM. LOVE
A   Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Hi Andrea, ha ha, I'm so glad you enjoyed my last copy paste, about comments on my comment. LOL, some got carried away, and talked hard candy about the comments on my comment. I guess, it's one of them case, I will never be left alone :)... Anyways, thank you for never thinking you are better than any of us... wuv you... LINDA
Torres Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 8:01 AM
Applause.. applause!!! ...where in this world did you gather all these words??...this is so inspiring... one that I could treasure in my shelf... !!! You are a certified brilliant and awesome poet, Andie!!! ..I awe you so much!! .. :O)) CONGRATULATIONS!!!
Callus Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 5:46 AM
What would we give to turn the clock back!! Is it all worth it? But the present has much to offer as well...the flame is still there...turn the wick up:) // congrats on another win in a long chain...// paul
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April 17, 2014 at 2:38 AM
Awesome Andrea ! Congrats on win ! Can hardly find any words to appreciate !
Mandani Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 12:24 PM
It happens with the best of us! Time to grope in the darkness.
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June 23, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Great entry, Andrea.... I'm captivated by your writing skills... Congrats, m'love. ... Jake
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June 22, 2013 at 10:03 PM
Andrea, . Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
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December 25, 2012 at 1:37 PM
Andrea, I admire your poem so much that I have placed it on my Face Book for my friends to read and admire. Visit my Face Book and see for yourself. Love. _Mohammad.
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 10:46 PM
Wow, wonderful poem. Great win. Congratulations!
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December 10, 2012 at 6:09 PM
Wonderful poem and win Andrea! Hugs
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December 10, 2012 at 3:38 PM
andrea, I've been meaning to stop by for days and now that I have I've discovered this lovely poem and I see it won 1st place, congrats! :-)
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December 10, 2012 at 9:41 AM
Big Congratulations my friend Andrea... its' indeed a winner!! Hugs, Maria
Ryerson Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 6:52 AM
An yes, you will see in the darkness, Andie...your inner- light will shine and show the way back home...beautifully done and congrats to you my good friend! - Tim
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December 10, 2012 at 5:24 AM
Congratulations on your winning place again Andy love xx
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