A Flame Once Burned

The Flame Burnt Hot.
The air was thin, standing looking out of the small window
Flying to Tunisia through a cloud level that was low
Stretching my legs and peering down the fuselage 
From the flight deck, appeared the man who was definitely in charge.

His dark good looks struck me, they hit me like a blow
He came and stood in front of me and then he said “Hello.”
Dark limpid brown eyes, dressed in a uniform so smart
If we had been there longer, he may have stolen my beating heart.

Holding in his hand, a bar of dark chocolate
Broke a piece off it, and asked me if I’d like to partake.
Not being a fan of chocolate, but I am a fan of a uniform so grand
I let him feed it to me out of his large, strong, tanned hand.

The flame was burning bright as we looked deep into each others eyes
When my husband tapped him on the shoulder much to our surprise
The pilot turned and offered him a piece of chocolate too
I think you may guess the answer, and what he told him then to do.

The flame that burned oh so hot, was snuffed in just a second
A warning to all those girls, for whom a uniform may beckon
When a tall dark pilot offers to feed you from his hand
Make sure there’s no one around round so that flame can then be fanned…

© 27/11/2012~GG~


Based very loosely on a true story lol
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 3:24 PM
Made me chuckle Goldie..nice to hve hubbie jealous a wee bit on occasion! Congrad's on your win. Happy hoildays. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 12:56 AM
You have to keep them on their toes Debbie lol xx
Liwayway Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:26 AM
Two thumbs up my friend Mandy for this fantastic win...big congratulations!! hugs!! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:49 AM
Hug back at you Maria love xx
Horsman Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:42 AM
number one, you are congrats
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Thanks harry xx
Macfarlane Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 5:23 PM
Glad this one took 1st place! Big congrats! Hugs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:02 AM
Thanks Cecilia, don't forget joint first love xx
A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:49 PM
Mandy, Congratulations with your awesome win in the "A Flame Once Burned " contest... always~PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:01 AM
Thanks PD xx
Arowolo Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:20 PM
Lovely and awesome piece,Mandy..Congratulations on your top place win in this contest...Kudos to you ,dear friend....
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:01 AM
Thanks Olusegun, you are a pal xx
Johnson Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 1:08 PM
Congrats Mandy. This was quite a little peek. :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:00 AM
Thanks Robert xx
Posey Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Mandy, I can see why your entry placed 1st. It's delightfully clever and returns a smile that developed on that evening flight to Tunisia. You see, I was there, just out of ear shot, taking a smoke break. I remember the occasion well.... Love Ya..... Jake
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 2:19 PM
So it was you, I thought so could tell fromm your avatar lol xx
Ober Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 12:41 PM
Wonderful! Congrats on a fabulous win :)
Goodwin Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:05 AM
I liked the part when your husband showed up and told him to.... Very nice write Mandy. Congratulations.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Thanks Sean, in reality hubby accepted the chocolate, unlike me he is a chocolate lover lol xx
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:02 AM
wow Mandy well done I saw it was a winner when you wrote it....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Thanks Seren, ha that's usually a kiss of death when someone says that.xx
May Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:47 AM
congrats on your super win Mandy...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:01 AM
Thanks Joseph my friend xx
Widjanarko Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:21 AM
Congratz on your win Mandy, lol it must be very surprised to see your husband suddenly coming while the flame of love was on fire XD, but still I enjoyed "the moment":D -hug, Yanny
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:06 AM
As I say Yanny it is only loosely based on a true story lol Thanks xx
Fraser Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 4:20 PM
Very well done Mandy, got a chuckle outta this one, blessings Carl
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 3:35 AM
Thanks Carl, bless you xx
May Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 12:20 PM
nicely penned Mandy....winning wishes.....
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Thanks Joseph xx
Macfarlane Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 8:07 PM
I will heed your warning Mandy dear, big smile....love this write of yours and the twist it took at the end. Hugs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 12:17 AM
Thanks Cecilia don't go round men in uniform with out your own man at your side, they are so hard to resist lol xx
Roberts Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 5:48 AM
mmmmm uniforms , nearly as good as welsh rugby mens butts in shorts, she swoons graciously.......Seren Great write hun ..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 6:23 AM
yes, doctor's have the worst one's poor you. Cor a nice butt in a uniform phew xx
Campi Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 5:19 AM
This poem was quite interesting. You gotta watch those guys in uniform, they can be very devilish. Take care and thanks for reading my recent poem, Jancarl
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 5:28 AM
My pleasure Jancarl xx
Harrell Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 4:46 PM
You, naughty girl, Mandy. Don't they look good in them? Funny write.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Oh gosh Toquyen, love a uniform, they do something for a man they really do . lol xx
Ellison Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 4:07 PM
What a hoot Miss Mandy lady! Absolutely adorable tale... loved it! More like this please!!! Love from across the pond! xox
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Thanks Jack, high praise indeed form the king of chuckles xx
Horne Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 2:34 PM
lol, wow, and it's kind of true - had a chuckle here : )
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 1:20 AM
Yes kinda true Jack...... glad it gave you a chuckle xx
Gildersleeve Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 2:12 PM
While reading, laughter escaped from my breath. Too funny. It sounds like you enjoyed penning these words. Great write Mandy. Sending smile, Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 1:19 AM
Thankss Connie, glad you enjoyed it xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Mandy, you are a hoot. I loved the twist on this fun poem. I hope I can do as well on that challenge!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 1:18 AM
ha owls hoot... and you know you will blast this with one of yours, but thanks for the compliment lol xx
Johnson Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Best to blow it out. :) Fun little adventure, hopefully only in your mind. God knows, I've certainly let my mind go places best only in my imagination. :) Enjoyed the little trist. Well written and rhymed.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 12:28 PM
It es well and truly snuffed Robert, as you say imagination is a wonderful thing xx
Esquire Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:51 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. a Remarkable Write YOUR Poetry is so true to life I enjoy YOUR POEMS so very much YOUR Laureatus Style intrigues me LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young Liege.. .Harry
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Harry, I really do appreciate all your lovely comment xx
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