A Fishing Trip

I love fishing in the deep blue sea,
but that fishing sure cost a lot to me.
First you have to gas up the car,
sometimes you have to go far.
Of course you have to stop for breakfast for two,
it cost $34.50 what can you do.
Then we need to rent a boat,
I hope this one really floats.
And then you need bait and such,
boy it really cost too much.
Finally we are out in the bay,
we fish in the sun all day.
We return home burned, broken and well done,
I guess we even had some fun.
However no fish were caught this day,
so pizza for dinner, it's OK.

JSergi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/17/2014 8:22:00 PM
Cool write my hubby loved it a lot, he said this poem a man can relate two great job, i liked it myself it really was honest and humorious. cheri glad you enjoyed my new poem thanks for the neat comment. cheri
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 3/18/2014 3:28:00 PM
Cheri glad your hubby liked the poem. He is right. Thanks for stopping by and for the post!
Date: 3/14/2014 10:15:00 AM
We were lake fishers... But understand completely... Great write.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 3/14/2014 3:25:00 PM
The cost seems to go up every year. Thanks Carol!
Date: 3/3/2014 10:36:00 PM
Made me giggle....so true some times....awesome poem...
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 3/4/2014 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Donna glad it made you smile. Thanks for the post and stopping by.
Date: 2/26/2014 8:08:00 PM
So much truth in this...I laughed and laughed. For me, its the experience, don't care if I catch anything or not..well, maybe I do care..lol. Enjoyed your poem. BG
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 2/27/2014 3:05:00 PM
Barbara thanks for stopping by glad I could make you smile. Thanks also for the post.
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