A Fisherman's Soul

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A long lost tomb was hidden by muddy olive ferns, as it thirsted for life beyond decomposition. This grave tries to reveal its lineage, but nights of sorrowful slumber for over one hundred and fifty years says otherwise… He lays inside a casket concealed; cold and frosted from life’s hardships. Once a fisherman, now a forgotten soul. His headstone was decaying for many reasons. It had weathered many storms and felt the pain of regret as the man inside had faltered. The one thing that remains a mystery is how does a dying headstone become covered with such bracken greenery? The only answer found is that no one has ever cared to visit him and clean up his grave out of love and respect. Passerby’s tarry frequently to visit their loved ones with floral bouquets and proud country flags representing who they were. His tomb is masked and rotting due to the adversities he has encountered for many a year. He needed the warmth of a family, but he gave that up too soon. He deserved much better than the guilt he carried for abandoning his only child at birth. You see, a hard working man at sea has no room for a child. He was a seaman by trade yet sought no navigation in his life. A woman he met for a night was never in his plans and neither was a child. Trading his blood for the open water seemed the right thing to do. Years went by and he longed for his child. He became lost and alone and cried many nights for the child that he so easily forgot at birth. He searched and soon found out his one and only baby died at only 6 weeks old. He had died from scurvy. Back then, scurvy was very contagious and was hard to find a cure. This was all his fault. A young life abandoned only to find death as his fate. Tears drift and crawl down the face of a skeleton who too had died from the same disease his child died from. Life lost and never found. The overshadowed tomb never saw the light of day again. The moss that grew out of control for over one hundred and fifty years kept growing, as did the man’s heartbreak. Skeletons too can feel loss. His brittle bones decayed worse the more he suffered in silence. The more silence he encountered the more anguish he endured. ~Loss can serve as a shroud for a damaged fisherman's soul, and mossy vines can serve as camouflage for his decaying headstone~ Camouflage Me A Poem - Poetry Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings Date Written: August 4, 2016

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Date: 8/12/2016 10:53:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, I love the layout and that image is beautiful too !
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Date: 8/12/2016 10:53:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, I love the layout and that image is beautiful too !
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Broken Wings, for my wonderful placement :) I am so grateful you enjoyed it as much as you did. thanks lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 8/11/2016 6:03:00 PM
So sad, but amazingly written, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:03:00 PM
thank you sweetest Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 8/11/2016 9:18:00 AM
You weaved a terrific image. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:03:00 PM
thank you DM :)-luloo
Date: 8/11/2016 8:56:00 AM
Very sad poem ....Congrats on your win Luloo...
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:02:00 PM
thank you Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 8/11/2016 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Laura:) Well deserving:)
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:02:00 PM
many thanks lovely Jo :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2016 11:19:00 PM
Laura, excellent poem!! Congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:01:00 PM
thank you lovely Eve :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2016 11:02:00 PM
Hi Luloo, What a sad well written poem. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. :-)Alexis
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:01:00 PM
thank you sweet Alexis :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2016 10:27:00 PM
I think you didn't agree with this fisherman's life choices and decisions -- but, giving his bones feelings, too? That's different. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:00:00 PM
Many thanks Tom :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2016 10:04:00 PM
gosh, your is intensely sad and you really showed that sadness so well here, Laura. I love the way you likened his brittle bones to an actual person still suffering in silence. BIg congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:00:00 PM
thank you lady :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2016 8:56:00 PM
I can see what a epic poem and what talent you have in making this story come alive, Laura. You took this challenge above and beyond ! Congratulations!!
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Date: 8/15/2016 3:59:00 PM
thank you Sweet Carrie :)-luloo
Date: 8/6/2016 7:54:00 AM
Nice take on the contest prompt. Reads like a winner, best of luck.
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Date: 8/15/2016 3:59:00 PM
many thanks Scott :)-luloo
Date: 8/4/2016 12:39:00 PM
heartbreakingly sad Luloo you wove a very good story:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2016 3:58:00 PM
thank you lady :)-luloo
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