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A Fish Story Childrens Story

This story begins in a pond on a farm .Where the most beautiful fish you've ever seen lived her name was Julie.All the other fish was jealous of her because she had the most beautiful fins.They were long and had every color in them.There was one fish in the whole pond that was nice to Julie and was not jealous of her.His name was Worm his favorite food was worms so thats where he got his name. One day as Julie swam through the pond"HEY THERE"she heard someone say as she looked around and seen worm hiding behind a rock.He snickered and asked her if he could swim with her she said"sure but first tell me why you were snickering"I wanted to ask if I could be your friend".Sure she said I need a friend.As they swam through the pond a boy was getting ready to go fishing.I'm so hungry worm said"just as the words came out the boy through out his line with a big juciey worm on his hook. Worm seen it and said"UMMM"and started swimming to the hook as fast as he could and Julie knew worm would be caught so she took off swimming around him and yelling"STOP".As she swam by the boys line her fins caught on his line he jerked and OH MY it jerked Julie's fins off and all the other fish just started laughing and saying look at you now.Julie started crying and worm said"please don't cry you saved my life can we stay friends your fins will grow back but friends are forever".So Julie and Worm became best friends. Teresa Skyles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/23/2011 3:13:00 PM
Another fine story telling poem Teresa my friend.. an underlying theme of jealousy which I simply don't understand that about people at all .. a beautiful work of art my friend..keep them coming ..enjoyable and entertaining ..luv..
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Date: 4/23/2011 1:09:00 PM
I like the story Teresa,.. very cute and not far from someone's reality tale of jealousy.. and I'm glad that worm and Julie remained friends... but truly her beauty worked out both ways... she also had inner beauty that worm saw... what a classy fish tale... loved it...p.d.
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