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A First Date

A First Date They met at church and chatted for a while, and the next day, he told her on the phone, "I'd like to take you out to lunch in style at that quaint restaurant that's so well-known." Her first date since her darling hubby passed, she almost told him no; but happily, she said she'd be delighted. Then he asked if she could meet him, and she did agree. She showed up timely, with her minivan, then waited at the table for an hour. He went and waited too...a let-down man. No show...he knew this first date had gone sour. 'Well-known and quaint'...the same place not for each! Hearts eager...but their lunch date...out of reach! Sandra M. Haight ~7th Place~ Premiere Contest: A First Date Sponsor: Brenda Chiri Judged: 02/14/2018 Theme: A first date and the most awkward time had... not funny then, but so amusing!
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Wolf Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 4:15 PM
So poignant! Heartfelt! And real!! These things happen---especially when getting back in the swim of life, so to speak. Bravo! Hats off to you on an excellent win! :) Gershon
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 11:59 AM
I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, Gershon. I appreciate your supportive and enthusiastic comments! Sandra
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra!.. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Adorable little poem. Great job, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Thank you very much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Aww, I hope they both had a sense of humor about this and re-scheduled. Nicely written, Sandra. Best of luck. John
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Oh, what a miscommunication!! You did this challenge very well. it's one I want to work on soon!
Haight Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Yes, Andrea. It was a fun write! Thanks for your visit and nice comments. Hugs, Sandra
Wigley Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Love it, and I've done something similar. Good luck in the contest, Sandra, Viv x
Haight Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Thank you so much, Viv, for your nice comment and best wishes for the contest. Much appreciated. Sandra :)
Allison Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 12:38 PM
aww Sandra you told such a touching story and i can imagine this happening for real. good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Yes, something like can happen for sure! Hugs, Sandra
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