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A Fine April Day

A fine April day-- People having so much fun Resting on the beach. Instantly a tsunami: Laughter vanished suddenly. March 28, 2023. Among 2nd Place March into April Poetry - Tankacrostic Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 4/10/2023 8:33:00 AM
ouch! I like the twist you turned at the end Ryan. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/9/2023 12:09:00 PM
- A wonderful time in Norway ... the snow melts and new life begins ... April is early spring ... Congratulations, Ryan :) -
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/9/2023 3:40:00 PM
Wow, it must be a beautiful time of the year there. In the Philippines, April is one of the hottest months. Students are on vacation and people go to the beach. Thanks, dear Friend.
Date: 4/9/2023 5:33:00 AM
A very twist-filled scene is painted beautifully. Congratulations!
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/9/2023 3:38:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 4/8/2023 11:00:00 AM
Well, you sure got in the twist at the end . Congrats
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/8/2023 9:43:00 PM
Wow, thank you, Andrea.
Date: 3/29/2023 1:04:00 AM
Oh! Such a turn of events, sad but brilliant contrast!
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Date: 3/28/2023 3:56:00 PM
Wow. A fantastic way to capture such chaos and tragedy, nice!
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 3/28/2023 4:23:00 PM
Thanks much for the kind words!

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