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A Fine Darkness

Having closed My eyes in a dark empty head in thoughts I stay between body and mind Fine darkness in it No colors No signs Nothing The noise of the outside Moments no time Calmness Of nothing How long I can keep it Knock on the door Awoke from the nothingness Again mind Again, body In the real world, which I am deceived Udaya R. Tennakoon

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Date: 4/5/2025 12:22:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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