A Final Adieu

The light to my life is flickering;
It shone bright for many years.
The fog around me is thickening,
But, please, spare me the tears.
I am fortunate to outlive the fears,
As long as I can lie here next to you
I’ll remember our fondest years -
As I bid you a final adieu.

The curtain falls on my final scene;
Confined to bed these last two years.
Giving plenty of time to reflect on things,
Realizing I have “Thank you’s” left in arrears.
I hope I haven’t underappreciated you, Dear;
I hope deep inside that you always knew
That I respected and loved having you so near -
As I bid you a final adieu.

I believe this is my last evening,
As I go to join my long passed peers.
I hope to be fitted with angel wings
And look down on you from way up there.
And late at night in dreams I’ll appear
To help chase away your blues.
I’ll do my best to keep your skies clear -
As I bid you a final adieu.

So, a little longer hold back the tears,
Until my last breath has finally passed through;
Hold my hand so I know you’re near -
As I bid you a final adieu.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/13/2011 1:52:00 PM
Very very well done and touching, you have a real knack for heartfelt verse! Light & Love CONGRAD's
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:21:00 PM
KUDOS to you for the top award in this ballade contest, joe... a challenging form yet done with rich impressions and language.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/10/2011 5:54:00 PM
This was one of the more difficult contests to enter a poem. However, you won first place with your entry. Congratulations on winning in the contest.
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:14:00 PM
A wonderful write. Congratulations on your first place win with this lovely Ballade. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:10:00 PM
Wow, Joe, I am reading this for the first time. I am so happy to see it won top place so that I might finally see your masterpiece. What a way to use the form! I hope it is not based on personal experience. Hope that you are healthy!! but yes, as very old age grows closer and closer, these thoughts starts to occupy the mind! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/10/2011 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win with this befitting ballade, Joe
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:09:00 AM
So well deserving of your 1st place win Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:38:00 AM
Sometimes people do know when they're about to die, Joe. If they have someone at their side, it is a more peaceful passing. Congratulations on your first-place win with this exquisite poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:49:00 AM
Such a lovely, but melancholy poem of love...Congratulations on this amazing piece of poetry!! Number 1 !!!
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on a truyly great ballad. Just what a ballad should be. Full of feeling. Great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:11:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your first place win in Catie's contest with this Ballade luv... enjoy...
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:05:00 AM
Enjoy the sweet victory of this well deserved 1st place win!
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:51:00 AM
Reached in and touched my soul. Magnificant, Joe. So derserving of FIRST PLACE. Lainie. To my fav's
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Date: 2/21/2011 6:30:00 PM
This is a very sad but wonderfully composed Ballade.Goodluck in the contest----kashinath
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Date: 2/21/2011 10:39:00 AM
tenderness at its best, joe... best winning wishes in the contest... much enjoyed! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/21/2011 10:31:00 AM
beautifully written, should do wonderful in the contest
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Date: 2/21/2011 10:31:00 AM
Such a sad but beautifully composed poem. You brought tears to my eyes. I enjoy your writing. Best wishes Em
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