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A Fierce Thunder Storm

In the early evening The sky had darkened A roar of thunder heard From the darkened sky The wind was powerful Rain drops poured slanted Quickly, hitting the dry ground The wind grew stronger Forcing the rain drops To fall faster on the windows The wind got very strong A powerful thud was heard Something fell to the floor She went to see what happened It was a wooden clock from the wall It fell on the floor in pieces Another thud was heard A tiny object fell to the floor It landed in one piece She was very surprised So she sat in the chair She thought this is a freaky storm

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Greg Gaul

Date: 12/10/2019 1:05:00 PM

Darlene, I came on your page to see how you were doing, you've been so kind to me. Scrolled to this poem, ostensibly your best and I got stopped at the title. Then I looked at all the comments, must be a couple dozen or so. You should be proud. Well, there's a typo in the title, big as life! Ferice is spelled Fierce. You'd think someone would have said so. Before me. Friends pick up friends. It was the least I could do for you. Keep up with it, this poem shows promise. Be well. And thanks again.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/10/2019 2:00:00 PM

Hello Greg Gaul, Thank you for telling me my mistake. Sometimes I type too quickly and misspell a word. I will correct it. Thank you i consider you my friend.Yes i am very proud of this poem.I want to wish you Merry Christmas.Enjy your day my friend.

Johnson Vdev

Date: 11/20/2019 8:43:00 PM

Rain drops falling on window panes so related to me watching rains ..the storm that shakes us really freaky. Good write my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/21/2019 7:43:00 AM

Hello Johnson Vdy,oh some thunder storms are rough. Bringing down trees and causing damage to property. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Ann Foster

Date: 10/31/2019 8:21:00 PM

Life is very surprising indeed. I am always amazed as somethings act one way, and some another? Most often making no sense to me at all. Loved your poem. Hugs. Ann

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/1/2019 7:06:00 AM

Hello Ann,it amazes me that a thunder storm with high winds can be powerful all through the evening. I love the sound of the wind. it makes me feel like I am by the water, listening to the waves come to shore. Hugs Darlene

Mubarika Sami

Date: 10/22/2019 1:58:00 PM

I love this evocative poem. Especially the line Raindrops poured slanted. Well done Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/22/2019 5:08:00 PM

Hello Mubarika Sami, hi! It was a very strong wind that knocked the wooden clock off the wall into pieces. Thank you for the lovely comment.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/20/2019 11:58:00 AM

Quite an unnerving thunderstorm you have penned. I'd have had a cow if I lost a clock to just a thunderstorm.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2019 1:38:00 PM

Hello M.L Kiser, yes it was an nerving thunder storm.Thank yo for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/20/2019 5:06:00 AM

Great descriptive poem, my friend! I admire your writing ability. Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2019 10:16:00 AM

Hello Pattie, hello Pattie, I hope that all is well with you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/20/2019 12:18:00 AM

My mother was terrified of lightening. I love a rainy night. Great job. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2019 10:18:00 AM

Hello Judy Ball, your mother must have had a good scare in her childhood to be scared of lightening. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2019 5:38:00 PM

Her calm meditation about the freaky storm. A powerful wind, slanted rain, large things (time) breaking, small things whole.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2019 10:30:00 AM

Hello Kim,yes she meditate. The wind was slanted and that wind was strong. have a nice day my friend.

Michelo Mweetwa

Date: 10/19/2019 9:25:00 AM

I like this. I thought of small things that are usually overlooked and it takes thunderstorm for them to happen. Like keeping a family home together. My loose interpretation.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/19/2019 12:25:00 PM

Hello Michelo Mweetwa, so nice to see you at my site. yes small things are over looked when it comes to thunder storm. It was also very windy that day that is when the wooden clock fell onto the floor in pieces. Have a nice day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/18/2019 8:00:00 AM

- It really sounds like a freaky storm, Darlene - Well written :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2019 8:16:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile,It was a freaky storm to knock of the wooden clock off the wall into pieces. The wind was very strong. to do this. Have a nic3 day my friend. hugs Darlene

J.W. Earnings

Date: 10/17/2019 9:19:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem.. I love the imagery and the lines portrayed here. :^) -JWE

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2019 7:52:00 AM

Hello J.W. Earnings,hello J.W.Earnings thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/17/2019 8:13:00 PM

It sounds like it might be safer outdoors. You never know when a clock might land on one’s head.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2019 7:54:00 AM

Hello Richard Lamoureux,I am glad that no one was in the dining room at that time it happened. It was spooky. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/17/2019 10:06:00 AM

Lovely imagery :-) I love a thunder storm x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2019 10:15:00 AM

Hello Elaine Perrin, thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/16/2019 9:59:00 PM

Just in time for Halloween Darlene...great freaky spooky story my friend...have a great stormy Hollows eve lol...and don't forget my candy lol...^WW^ :o)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2019 10:17:00 AM

Hello Winged Warrior, What type of candy do you enjoy? I will make sure I have it. Happy Halloween to you my friend. Have a nice day my friend.

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/16/2019 8:12:00 PM

Nice poem but I think you meant "fierce". Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2019 10:22:00 AM

Hello Matthew Anish, Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes i did mean to fierce I hit the wrong key. Peacd and Love Darlene

Silent One

Date: 10/16/2019 12:09:00 PM

Sounds very freaky... Hope you are well.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2019 2:24:00 PM

Hello Silent One, yes it is freaky. don't expect a big bang -it is scary. Thank you for the lovely comment. yes i am well thank you I hope you are to. have a nice day my friend.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 10/16/2019 11:56:00 AM

Very lovely and lovingly done...a birth craft a great piece a splendid verse... Write on Darlene! James :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2019 2:26:00 PM

Hello James Edward Lee Sr. Thank you for the lovely comment. My friend have a nice day. Darlene.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 10/15/2019 11:35:00 PM

The moral of the poem is you should always fix your clocks tight and make it small as possible.. I like the poem.. Have a nice day!!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2019 11:08:00 AM

Hello Jenish Somadas, this is a good moral.my friend's wooden clock has been on the wall for many years. A freaky rain storm with the wind blowing knocked the clock off the wall. have a nice day my friend.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/15/2019 10:26:00 PM

Hello Darlene … intense thunderstorms can make us apprehensive indeed. They can scare us at best or do intense damage at worst. Nicely described Darlene - Lindsay

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2019 11:23:00 AM

Hello Lindsay,yes a fierce wind blew the wooden clock off the wall and a small ornament fell off the mirror in one piece. Yes thunder storms can be intense. Have a nice day my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/15/2019 7:02:00 PM

Hi Darlene, I really enjoyed your descriptive and well written piece. I could just picture and hear the storm. Well done my friend. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2019 11:30:00 AM

Hello Alexis Y. thank you for the lovely comment.This storm did happen and the wooden clock did fall to the floor in pieces. The small ornament did fall on the floor in one piece. have a nice day my friend.