Valsa George Poet Triolet

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A Field of Flowers

There is a lone field before me
With sweet flowers that draws the eyes
Round the blooms, roams many a bee
There is a lone field before me
A nice sight all would love to see
Straggly clouds sail along the skies
There is a lone field before me
With sweet flowers that draws the eyes

August.23.2022

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Triolet – Old or New Poetry Contest
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Sponsor- Joseph May

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Sara Kendrick July 21, 2024 at 10:56 PM Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. A field of flowers is a wonderful sight. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith August 25, 2022 at 10:48 AM Congratulations on your win. A Beautiful write/picture. I love this one. Have a great/blessed day...................

Connie Marcum Wong August 25, 2022 at 1:43 AM Wow Valsa, a gorgeous poem and picture to unite with! Congratulations on your wonderful first place win. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit August 24, 2022 at 2:14 PM Beautiful field of flowers and a beautiful rhythmic poem. I see from the comments below that BIG congrats are in order for your splendid win, Valsa.

Joseph May August 24, 2022 at 2:02 PM Wonderful write Valsa, Congrats on your win Valsa George August 24, 2022 at 8:54 PM Thanks a lot dear Joseph for the contests you arrange from time to time . Thanks also for choosing my poem for the win !

Constance La France August 24, 2022 at 2:01 PM Valsa, a beautiful Triolet and image and congratulations on your win in the contest ~

Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2022 at 1:59 PM Love this one, Valsa. I hope you got a high score for it? I especially liked the straggly clouds line.

Sara Kendrick August 24, 2022 at 7:03 AM Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. These are not so easy to write but yours flows very well. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis August 24, 2022 at 4:58 AM Enchanting Triolet, dearest Valsa! Mesmerizing field of beauty! Be blessed!

Anitha Jayasankar August 23, 2022 at 9:23 PM Loved the picture and your verse dear Valsa... Yes, there is nothing more peaceful that being amidst nature, the fresh blooms, watching them by breathing fresh air... Your words are so apt for the picture... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Bill Baker August 23, 2022 at 2:15 PM Nice Triolet, Valsa. the imagery was delightful. A peaceful reading. Good luck in the contest my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Paul Callus August 23, 2022 at 1:16 PM Both the poem and accompanying visual are lovely, Valsa. I especially like the sweet flowers that draw(s) the eyes. ~ Regards // paul

Sotto Poet August 23, 2022 at 11:23 AM I love your writing Valsa's; it's very lyrical. You've brought us to an unique vantage point, and there's a lot discover. By crossing those limits, we put excessive strain on our sensory experiences. Best wishes for the contest and Hugs

Rico Leffanta August 23, 2022 at 10:37 AM Looks like Ukraine in the distance, but enjoyed your Triolet! Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues August 23, 2022 at 7:27 AM Yes, a lovely write! You draw us to a solitary view and in it there is so much. When we seek to go out of these bounds, we overexert our senses. Hugs ~ Kim

Anselmo Boles August 23, 2022 at 7:17 AM Valsa, this one gives you fresh and pleasant thoughts and feelings. Well crafted!...ab

Victor Buhagiar August 23, 2022 at 6:03 AM A lovely triolet. I never tried this form. You did well, dear Valsa.