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There is a lone field before me With sweet flowers that draws the eyes Round the blooms, roams many a bee There is a lone field before me A nice sight all would love to see Straggly clouds sail along the skies There is a lone field before me With sweet flowers that draws the eyes August.23.2022 ~ Placed First~ Triolet – Old or New Poetry Contest Syllables checked with HMS Sponsor- Joseph May

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 8/25/2022 9:01:00 PM

Congratulations,Valsa, on your win for a fine triolet.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/25/2022 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A Beautiful write/picture. I love this one. Have a great/blessed day...................

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2022 1:43:00 AM

Wow Valsa, a gorgeous poem and picture to unite with! Congratulations on your wonderful first place win. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/24/2022 2:14:00 PM

Beautiful field of flowers and a beautiful rhythmic poem. I see from the comments below that BIG congrats are in order for your splendid win, Valsa.

Joseph May

Date: 8/24/2022 2:02:00 PM

Wonderful write Valsa, Congrats on your win

Valsa George
Date: 8/24/2022 8:54:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Joseph for the contests you arrange from time to time . Thanks also for choosing my poem for the win !

Constance La France

Date: 8/24/2022 2:01:00 PM

Valsa, a beautiful Triolet and image and congratulations on your win in the contest ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2022 1:59:00 PM

Love this one, Valsa. I hope you got a high score for it? I especially liked the straggly clouds line.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2022 7:03:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. These are not so easy to write but yours flows very well. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/24/2022 4:58:00 AM

Enchanting Triolet, dearest Valsa! Mesmerizing field of beauty! Be blessed!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/23/2022 9:23:00 PM

Loved the picture and your verse dear Valsa... Yes, there is nothing more peaceful that being amidst nature, the fresh blooms, watching them by breathing fresh air... Your words are so apt for the picture... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Bill Baker

Date: 8/23/2022 2:15:00 PM

Nice Triolet, Valsa. the imagery was delightful. A peaceful reading. Good luck in the contest my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Paul Callus

Date: 8/23/2022 1:16:00 PM

Both the poem and accompanying visual are lovely, Valsa. I especially like the sweet flowers that draw(s) the eyes. ~ Regards // paul

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/23/2022 11:23:00 AM

I love your writing Valsa's; it's very lyrical. You've brought us to an unique vantage point, and there's a lot discover. By crossing those limits, we put excessive strain on our sensory experiences. Best wishes for the contest and Hugs

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/23/2022 10:37:00 AM

Looks like Ukraine in the distance, but enjoyed your Triolet! Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/23/2022 7:27:00 AM

Yes, a lovely write! You draw us to a solitary view and in it there is so much. When we seek to go out of these bounds, we overexert our senses. Hugs ~ Kim

Anselmo Boles

Date: 8/23/2022 7:17:00 AM

Valsa, this one gives you fresh and pleasant thoughts and feelings. Well crafted!...ab

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/23/2022 6:03:00 AM

A lovely triolet. I never tried this form. You did well, dear Valsa.