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A Field, Imagined

embracing the trumpet blast heat 
a boy and girl
hide and seek
midst tall grasses
                  rising like promises at dawn
vibrant lightness of limbs
                   in a green reach
                   lush
                   effortless

two youths
        seek
        rush
        conceal
never quite hidden
nor wanting to be
in verdant bits of impulse
         rotating
         rolling
aromatic blooming that bridges heckling trouble

with energy deflating
in a random shuffling of touch
she ruffles his hair, tufts of flaxen straw
to trace sweat lines on a sun-brown cheek
as if happiness could be cupped like water in hand

in this field
absolved from the discord of home
their plain surface vows
comforting
like the grass rolled flat
                         under surges of joy



Poem composed March 26, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/30/2023 2:53:00 PM
Nice description of your lawn, Brian. Nicely penned poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/30/2023 7:37:00 PM
Hello Lassad, Thank you for your message. My poem, though, describes a field of tall grasses, not my lawn. The teens field romp in summer splendor, play at hide and seek as a ruse for their passion. A possibly controversial write for some. Thank you for your stop by + comment. Be well. Brian
Date: 5/30/2023 1:03:00 PM
Brian, a wonderful and creative poem, well done !
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/30/2023 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. I had forgotten about my entry into this contest as it was so long ago. Best wishes always, Brian
Date: 3/28/2023 8:15:00 PM
Pictures of desire "through the stages of man"? Loved the opening lines /stanza Brian, grabbed my attention. Shalom shalom
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/29/2023 6:17:00 AM
Hope all is well with you, Anil. My appreciation for your positive assessment of my poem. Be well. Brian
Date: 3/27/2023 7:51:00 AM
I enjoyed your story/write. I took my grass write in a very different direction. Enjoy your day writing....................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/27/2023 8:59:00 AM
Hello Paula, Thank you for responding affirmatively to my small poem on passion in long grasses. I hope that you are well. Sincerely, Brian

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