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A Field, Imagined

embracing the trumpet blast heat a boy and girl hide and seek midst tall grasses rising like promises at dawn vibrant lightness of limbs in a green reach lush effortless two youths seek rush conceal never quite hidden nor wanting to be in verdant bits of impulse rotating rolling aromatic blooming that bridges heckling trouble with energy deflating in a random shuffling of touch she ruffles his hair, tufts of flaxen straw to trace sweat lines on a sun-brown cheek as if happiness could be cupped like water in hand in this field absolved from the discord of home their plain surface vows comforting like the grass rolled flat under surges of joy Poem composed March 26, 2022

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Date: 11/26/2023 7:44:00 PM
intuitively and creatively composed, great flow and energy
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/26/2023 7:51:00 PM
My appreciation for your comment, Mat. The exuberance of youth is a good push for one's pen. I recall my now lost to time, romps in tall grasses. Be well. Brian
Date: 5/30/2023 2:53:00 PM
Nice description of your lawn, Brian. Nicely penned poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/30/2023 7:37:00 PM
Hello Lassad, Thank you for your message. My poem, though, describes a field of tall grasses, not my lawn. The teens field romp in summer splendor, play at hide and seek as a ruse for their passion. A possibly controversial write for some. Thank you for your stop by + comment. Be well. Brian
Date: 5/30/2023 1:03:00 PM
Brian, a wonderful and creative poem, well done !
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/30/2023 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. I had forgotten about my entry into this contest as it was so long ago. Best wishes always, Brian
Date: 3/28/2023 8:15:00 PM
Pictures of desire "through the stages of man"? Loved the opening lines /stanza Brian, grabbed my attention. Shalom shalom
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/29/2023 6:17:00 AM
Hope all is well with you, Anil. My appreciation for your positive assessment of my poem. Be well. Brian
Date: 3/27/2023 7:51:00 AM
I enjoyed your story/write. I took my grass write in a very different direction. Enjoy your day writing....................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/27/2023 8:59:00 AM
Hello Paula, Thank you for responding affirmatively to my small poem on passion in long grasses. I hope that you are well. Sincerely, Brian

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