A Few More Hours

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A few more hours the world will count a new year in a new year out and here am I within your arms I count the time by all your charms Our bodies sway you hold me tight the candles blaze On New Year's Night the fireworks within your eyes now scintillate along my thighs we celebrate the time draws near that burst of love to other sphere the TV lights dance to and fro the countdown on in passion glow I see your face bathed in desire we're almost there you rock me higher And then as one we burst in flame the New Year's come our love, the same What better place for you and me than in the throes of ecstasy!!! You hear me sigh and sweetly say, "My New Year's joy is here to stay." Eileen Manassian

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/30/2017 9:19:00 AM

Happy New Year Eileen. :0)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 1/16/2017 3:24:00 AM

Amazing poem...simply awe-inspiring. I hope you have a fantastic 2017! ~JWE

J.W. Earnings
Date: 1/16/2017 3:25:00 AM

So passionately written by the way** sorry I forgot to put that ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/2/2017 10:05:00 AM

A great way to conclude and start a new year Eileen. You brought the heat! Ooh la la sweet!

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/1/2017 4:32:00 PM

You rock me higher:) Very hot, Eileen! Happy New Year!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/1/2017 5:21:00 PM

Sizzling!!! :) It's a re-post. Somehow I was in a more morose type of mood today. Still, I thought I'd pay tribute to how New Year's Eve should play out. Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2017 6:34:00 AM

wow this is hot hot hot Eileen you really deserve the Queen of Passion title my friend! Happy new year:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/1/2017 5:23:00 PM

Those fireworks!!! Blame it on that! Hugs, sweetie. Hope all is well with you. Happy New Year. May it bring you the best.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/1/2017 4:55:00 AM

What is more beautiful than a New year's Eve within the one's arms...Fabulous sweety.Happy New Year.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/1/2017 5:18:00 AM

Thanks, dear. I wrote a slam poem. I will post a bit later. This is a re-post. Yes, you are right. This is how it should be. Hugs, dear one. Happy New Year.